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Observation in Orb
Overcast in horde
of vast
Absorbing shadows cast
entrenched
in
the monster of energy
Where one
stands
out
from time to
time
I saw you talking to yourself
walking
with
your
self,
even in a crowd.
Published 18th Sep 2022
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18th Sep 2022 11:58pm
I always talk to myself... I am the only one who listens... nicely done Cipher...
19th Sep 2022 8:10am
It could be, also, that if you were the only one who listens, this poem would not exist...
:)
Thank you LDF...
:)
Thank you LDF...
22nd Sep 2022 1:32am
Well hello Cipher.
To me this has your energy in it. All your poems do of course - but this (to me)
oozes that monster energy you ooze amigo. hahahah
With the hordes and shadows. Yep!
Great piece buddy!!
To me this has your energy in it. All your poems do of course - but this (to me)
oozes that monster energy you ooze amigo. hahahah
With the hordes and shadows. Yep!
Great piece buddy!!
22nd Sep 2022 3:48am
