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I just want to be love.........
Is that asking to much?
That's how it seems
I just keep getting crush
My heart has been broken, cheated,
stabbed, and played
All cause a man is trying to get laid
I'm left feeling betrayed
It takes more then words and a nice date
To become my bedmate
I'm looking for my King
To step into my reality
Can I be loved
That's all I'm asking
Is that asking to much?
That's how it seems
I just keep getting crush
My heart has been broken, cheated,
stabbed, and played
All cause a man is trying to get laid
I'm left feeling betrayed
It takes more then words and a nice date
To become my bedmate
I'm looking for my King
To step into my reality
Can I be loved
That's all I'm asking
Published 27th Mar 2012
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27th Mar 2012 6:39pm
Are you sure that's what you want. "it takes a fool to learn that love don't love nobody" so search for a person to love you-not love.
The true search for "love" will lead you down a path so dark that love can't be seen. Open your heart and mind and see past the words......
This was thought provoking......
......btw, all men aren't looking to get laid : )
The true search for "love" will lead you down a path so dark that love can't be seen. Open your heart and mind and see past the words......
This was thought provoking......
......btw, all men aren't looking to get laid : )
27th Mar 2012 6:51pm
:-) very thought provoking. I wrote this thinking about a relationship miss being in one but I'm choosing to be single cause the guys in Atlanta the ladies have made it to easy
Anonymous
28th Mar 2012 5:13am
I feel you on this one. Some have no feelings of real passion. They just want the sex.
28th Mar 2012 1:32pm
