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Falling: 9/13/2022
...instead of going straight to sleep at 3:00 am in the morning, no doubt exhausted, you, in the most quiet-gentle way possible, made your way under the duvet, taking care not to wake me, though I must admit I was half awake - somewhere between a dream and reality, i felt your arms gently wrap around me, your body curl up around my body, and your quiet quiet voice whisper to the nape of my neck "I love you, i love you...i love you" ..as if you didn't for the world of you want to stir my sleep, but just couldn't not tell me ..and i don't think i've ever felt the full force of those words from a man until then.. "I love you too"
Published 13th Sep 2022
Author's Note
might be too sappy,
but oh well, it's how i feel :)
but oh well, it's how i feel :)
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13th Sep 2022 10:29pm
That's a beautiful feeling when it comes. Truth that speaks to heart and soul. So happy for you! 🌼❤
16th Sep 2022 7:32pm
Thank you for your kind words, I truly feel the positivity and good vibes <3
Hope you have a wonderful weekend friend <3
Hope you have a wonderful weekend friend <3
14th Sep 2022 1:14am
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14th Sep 2022 5:51am
Dearest, Umm
This is not sappy at all. You beautifully describe a romantic interlude that all lovers of love yearn for.🥰 i enjoyed the way you've painted this serene dream🙏💞
This is not sappy at all. You beautifully describe a romantic interlude that all lovers of love yearn for.🥰 i enjoyed the way you've painted this serene dream🙏💞
16th Sep 2022 7:35pm
Hello dear friend <3
nice to see you, and thank you! ^-^
happy this isn't coming off as sappy, and your kind words are so nice to hear <3
nice to see you, and thank you! ^-^
happy this isn't coming off as sappy, and your kind words are so nice to hear <3
14th Sep 2022 11:17am
Dear U,
I really enjoyed the intense yet gentle passion in this poem. I thought the details in the scene were lovely and something everyone wants whether they express it verbally or secretly desire it and don’t know how to say it. Lovely write. H🌷
I really enjoyed the intense yet gentle passion in this poem. I thought the details in the scene were lovely and something everyone wants whether they express it verbally or secretly desire it and don’t know how to say it. Lovely write. H🌷
16th Sep 2022 7:36pm
Hello <3
Im truly happy to read that, and happy that the moment I portrayed read the way I wished it to, and also, that you enjoyed it. So nice to hear such wonderful feedback <3
Im truly happy to read that, and happy that the moment I portrayed read the way I wished it to, and also, that you enjoyed it. So nice to hear such wonderful feedback <3
14th Sep 2022 1:56pm
absolutely brilliant, wonderful upbeat narrative. written very well, and I would imagine with great care. you have a gift, and are gifted
well done :),
well done :),
16th Sep 2022 7:38pm
You are too kind sir! <3
...and also encouraged me to share this write with the one it's about, thank you for always supporting me and being so uplifting
<3
...and also encouraged me to share this write with the one it's about, thank you for always supporting me and being so uplifting
<3
15th Sep 2022 5:43pm
As a focused singular scene it points to depth of intimacy, passing of time together and all we overcome to arrive at such a place, all subtly imbued. Thank you for sharing this with us.
you are more than welcome, and thank you for your kind words! <3 ...as well as for giving me a look into how this read to you, what it portrayed and how - that's so interesting to me, especially if/when your interpretation aligns so well with what I was aiming for.
appreciate the comment <3
appreciate the comment <3
6th Oct 2022 2:22pm
I often think about what the reader's interpretation tells me about them as well. It was my pleasure.
6th Oct 2022 2:22pm
I often think about what the reader's interpretation tells me about them as well. It was my pleasure.
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20th Jun 2023 3:27pm
Upon the wings of love
is a merger that touches the divine
a knowing that the dyad
is truly one of a kind
is a merger that touches the divine
a knowing that the dyad
is truly one of a kind
3rd Dec 2023 11:38pm
And then he falls asleep, starts snoring in your ear and farts at regular intervals.
Xxx
Xxx
