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Then..........Take My Hand
By your rules I was sedated
Though didn't leave me lifeless like this
U were never on my side of the bed
And also though things are still clear
Knew U'd never know the taste of my lick
I ran u from inside of my ah head
The day that I ah met u
It faded like forever
I knew I'd never luhv u
Saw it as always being never
I became the cold outside
Like soon as I walk out your life
Though we never planned to ah wife
I............been like this all the time
So on this day u want u and me
I'm a heartbreak anniversary
Cause I.............remember everytime
On this day u want u and me
But babe I'm a heartbreak anniversary
So with u encaptured I must tell thee
I can't build thy ah hopes up
I'm telling u this cause u be ah gay
U can't have this situae...it's not for the day
My patience is still ah clear
How could u want even the taste of my lips
When all along a nigga's not thy side of the ah bed
Hear the heart of this girl for gal ah blessing
To be with u was an ah never
Showing u my swear to aluv u
I'm here to remove that ah never
With u I'm the cold outside
I'm here right now in thy life
My homeboy please be my damn ah wife
I...........see being without u as an ah crime
On this day I'd become a cry baby
Without u is the ah worst to ah me
Cause I.....ah see without u as not the intertwine
On this ah day my ah cry is for u and me
I will not ever ah hurt u
Please take the ah dear ah hand of me
Please....ah listen to an ah funny
I'll let u......gone and ah speak ah wunny
I've ah build my ah hopes up
I did myself ah mirror reflection ah face
Even thy life for 20 years ah traced.......
Though foolish I'm patient..................
I've eaten my ah pussy nwutt to ah taste your ah lick
To have your ah lips to ah mine upon my ah lady ah bed.....
So take my ah hand as my ah luhva
I'll grant an ah forever
That'll stamp our ah luhv us
Removing your mental never
Being with u the ah cold outside
To never walk out my life.........
The same needing u to her as wife
My......heart for u beats all the time
On this day please be the wife of me
We the cold we ah need of each
Cause my.......heart for u beats all the time
Take my hand and be the wife of me
I'm truly funny......in awet aluv with....thee
Though didn't leave me lifeless like this
U were never on my side of the bed
And also though things are still clear
Knew U'd never know the taste of my lick
I ran u from inside of my ah head
The day that I ah met u
It faded like forever
I knew I'd never luhv u
Saw it as always being never
I became the cold outside
Like soon as I walk out your life
Though we never planned to ah wife
I............been like this all the time
So on this day u want u and me
I'm a heartbreak anniversary
Cause I.............remember everytime
On this day u want u and me
But babe I'm a heartbreak anniversary
So with u encaptured I must tell thee
I can't build thy ah hopes up
I'm telling u this cause u be ah gay
U can't have this situae...it's not for the day
My patience is still ah clear
How could u want even the taste of my lips
When all along a nigga's not thy side of the ah bed
Hear the heart of this girl for gal ah blessing
To be with u was an ah never
Showing u my swear to aluv u
I'm here to remove that ah never
With u I'm the cold outside
I'm here right now in thy life
My homeboy please be my damn ah wife
I...........see being without u as an ah crime
On this day I'd become a cry baby
Without u is the ah worst to ah me
Cause I.....ah see without u as not the intertwine
On this ah day my ah cry is for u and me
I will not ever ah hurt u
Please take the ah dear ah hand of me
Please....ah listen to an ah funny
I'll let u......gone and ah speak ah wunny
I've ah build my ah hopes up
I did myself ah mirror reflection ah face
Even thy life for 20 years ah traced.......
Though foolish I'm patient..................
I've eaten my ah pussy nwutt to ah taste your ah lick
To have your ah lips to ah mine upon my ah lady ah bed.....
So take my ah hand as my ah luhva
I'll grant an ah forever
That'll stamp our ah luhv us
Removing your mental never
Being with u the ah cold outside
To never walk out my life.........
The same needing u to her as wife
My......heart for u beats all the time
On this day please be the wife of me
We the cold we ah need of each
Cause my.......heart for u beats all the time
Take my hand and be the wife of me
I'm truly funny......in awet aluv with....thee
Published 13th Sep 2022
Author's Note
These are the San Francisco Files upon the ah deep! If u can't comment, still please ah do enjoy! This is truly ah beautiful.
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There's so much raw emotion and real driving intensity that your poem generates, Birchel. It's obvious that you come from a place of true passion in the way your unique poetic style evokes all that your heart and mind desires.
I was taken by the line "I became the cold outside" That line was freaking fire and stole the show for me. It really hit a neve, so much so that I immediately highlighted it because it was so powerful. It resonated deeply in a war that I related to 1000%
I'm glad you showed me the way to this one, my friend. You are becoming more and more poetic with every poem you pen. Too awesome!
Fantastic ink
and a job well done!! 👍🏻
Much love and thoughts of peace and well being sent your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 💙
B
I was taken by the line "I became the cold outside" That line was freaking fire and stole the show for me. It really hit a neve, so much so that I immediately highlighted it because it was so powerful. It resonated deeply in a war that I related to 1000%
I'm glad you showed me the way to this one, my friend. You are becoming more and more poetic with every poem you pen. Too awesome!
Fantastic ink
and a job well done!! 👍🏻
Much love and thoughts of peace and well being sent your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 💙
B
13th Sep 2022 7:13pm
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