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Awashed
the sun could never dry
i
awashed with a striking semblance
seeking solace amid a summer breeze
a tease she is
encumbered
echoes embarking her distance
never giving way
her oceans hold my silence
where secrets once flowed
but mercilessly
now drift away
i listen intently
hoping to discover
just one more wave
I'm stranded
straddled along
the sandy shore
sunset streaks across the sky
shades of blue
shades of red
drenched in feeling
looking out to what i can and cannot see
and whisper
what i should and shouldn't have said
i
awashed with a striking semblance
seeking solace amid a summer breeze
a tease she is
encumbered
echoes embarking her distance
never giving way
her oceans hold my silence
where secrets once flowed
but mercilessly
now drift away
i listen intently
hoping to discover
just one more wave
I'm stranded
straddled along
the sandy shore
sunset streaks across the sky
shades of blue
shades of red
drenched in feeling
looking out to what i can and cannot see
and whisper
what i should and shouldn't have said
Published 7th Sep 2022
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7th Sep 2022 11:41pm
8th Sep 2022 1:15am
Hey Tim
This is so enchanting. I totally see and feel the picture you
created in this. Has a washed away feel to it. Like on a stranded island but
at the same time enjoying the sun set and contemplating regret.
Really lovely to read:)
This is so enchanting. I totally see and feel the picture you
created in this. Has a washed away feel to it. Like on a stranded island but
at the same time enjoying the sun set and contemplating regret.
Really lovely to read:)
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