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to touch the sky
I walk in the garden and commune with all that is natural
surveying the trees, grass and flowers
then touch the sky whispering thoughts of beauty to the day
I am beloved of the spirt
the air caresses my skin and I know my place on this spinning caravan
I am one woman on earth making love to the aether
celebrating with humankind
sigh to touch the sky
connected to wavelengths we hum
distinct energies coming from each one
we talk soul to soul
bearing our innocence and our wisdom
we are a reflection of one another
journeying together yet with great individuality
a unique print of the vast spirit that guides
we are his beloved
a crowned jewel in his eyes
Author's Note
good morning you guys 💕
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3rd Sep 2022 4:48pm
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3rd Sep 2022 4:50pm
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3rd Sep 2022 4:52pm
good morning beautiful poetess I can only attribute the spirit I feel around me for this thank you lovely soul for the beautiful comment 💕
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4th Sep 2022 4:49am
You are most welcome eclectic poetical soul,
continue to shine through the essence of the verbalized mindz that enable your words to flow
continue to shine through the essence of the verbalized mindz that enable your words to flow
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3rd Sep 2022 2:32pm
i picture a wonderful, steady disintegration as the walls separating physical and spiritual begin to crumble. cracks forming, light peaking in. this garden walk feels as though it may give way at any moment to garden floating, as though gravity itself may release it's hold in favor of freedom. we are a reflection of one another - i could not have said it better!
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3rd Sep 2022 4:54pm
good morning dearest Neal thank you for sharing your vision this was inspired by my morning routine and your lovely poem...such a beautiful vision it is 💕
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21st Sep 2022 3:32pm
Whether it's a prayer, or a conversation with the universe, this is a wonderful refreshing piece of what it means to commune with nature.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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21st Sep 2022 8:06pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally it's what I try to do every day walk in the garden and touch the sky... smiles at you... you are deeply appreciated 💕