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Animals
I don’t know about you
but I like animals
so I hope your not a china doll
or
some plastic sound byte Barbie
I hope you like noise
And I hope you have claws
like that!
Hell yeah!
just like that!
but I like animals
so I hope your not a china doll
or
some plastic sound byte Barbie
I hope you like noise
And I hope you have claws
like that!
Hell yeah!
just like that!
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Re. Animals
It's the growls, mews and the fingernails down the back (and elsewhere) that let each other beautifully communicate non verbally as passions are climbing toward an apex... making it almost impossible to speak....
I say the louder and the more consentually physical, the better!!
What a steamy and palpable admission!
Thanks for sharing that mental image....
Well done, you ;)
🌹 💙
B
I say the louder and the more consentually physical, the better!!
What a steamy and palpable admission!
Thanks for sharing that mental image....
Well done, you ;)
🌹 💙
B
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1st Sep 2022 10:20pm
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2nd Sep 2022 8:54am
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2nd Sep 2022 8:59am
Seriously hot write. If I smoked and still drank, I’d need both right now. I really enjoyed the heat and intensity of this.
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2nd Sep 2022 10:38am
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2nd Sep 2022 9:20pm
Re. Animals
2nd Sep 2022 11:49pm
Oh hell yeah! I love animals...
Go ahead, try and break me.
I might just break you first...
Getting really excited.
Biting your shoulder too.
But you are going to love it.
My nails making trails down your back.
Taking me lower... just where you want me.
just like that! ;)
Keeping you on edge, edging... ;)
Until you just cannot take it anymore.
But don't worry I will pick up the pieces.
And put you back together again.
So makes me think of Nine Inch Nails - Closer (I want to Fuck you like an animal)
Go ahead, try and break me.
I might just break you first...
Getting really excited.
Biting your shoulder too.
But you are going to love it.
My nails making trails down your back.
Taking me lower... just where you want me.
just like that! ;)
Keeping you on edge, edging... ;)
Until you just cannot take it anymore.
But don't worry I will pick up the pieces.
And put you back together again.
So makes me think of Nine Inch Nails - Closer (I want to Fuck you like an animal)
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Re: Re. Animals
3rd Sep 2022 12:29pm
Its thoughts.like this that make me wonder why people say, "Don't feed the wildlife." 🌼🤔😁
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3rd Sep 2022 1:18pm
Definitely feed the wild life. ;) It's insatiable... I love seeing this side of your writing. It's the romantic ones that really want to get wild, isn't it? ;) I bet there are a lot of secrets hidden in there. lol
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3rd Sep 2022 3:38pm
And you usually keep your romantic side secret.
We all have our secret sides 🌼
We all have our secret sides 🌼
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3rd Sep 2022 8:54pm
And yet I am so intensely romantic... And I love getting into the secret sides. ;) I have actually written quite a number on love. :p But you are certainly one of the best at writing romance, that's for sure... ;)
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1st Nov 2022 11:44pm
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