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Mm.. Hum... My Immortal Man
The moon dance upon the whispers of the night
The soft illumination of reality blends as twilight becomes my passage of rite
Mm… inch closer my handsome man your neck beckons until my sultry call
Once taken under my cloak, surrendering passion takes the sweetest fall
Join me in the abyss of gratification as we soar past the river, oceans, the stars, never to look back
Within that moment in time, I give unto you the breath of immorality as my King Tomcat
You feel the charge in your loins radiating down to your feet
The fire we blaze when the destinies of our bodies blend in heat of silken sheets
Desires, lust, entwined we are, rapture I lay at the helm of your feet
Immortal man
In your nakedness, the supreme of your body I command
My soft hands stroking the virility of ecstasy within your soul, at my will I will tenderly demand
Sniff the aphrodisiac reeking from my pores and in this realistic nocturnal romance
Undress me as I take a journey through your mind
Heighted pleasure, as you travel farther, my spirit will come as you seek, my creamy treasure you shall find
Taste upon the softness of my skin, get intoxicated off my flavor
Let it arouse you like sips of vintage wine once inside your head, your bed the feeling of me you will cum then savor
Feasting your tongue around my breasts
Mm… immortal man you do know how to make me wet
Once my ancient blood is pumping through your veins
By the full moon, you lay me upon the green pasture, and sink into my candy rain
The earth moving, shaking
Losing our souls in the chasm of our spiritual love making
Cum deep into me my immortal man
Our limbs entangled, time for us has no realm
Love bites, my breathless moans, your explicit groans sailing to the fasting of the sunrise
Easing slowly from the pleasure found between centuries of my Creole thighs
Go my love, you will kiss upon the sweetest ambrosia of Luna real soon
Where the life fore of your heart I will always rest upon past the beginning of noon
Tender kisses to you my immortal man…always
The soft illumination of reality blends as twilight becomes my passage of rite
Mm… inch closer my handsome man your neck beckons until my sultry call
Once taken under my cloak, surrendering passion takes the sweetest fall
Join me in the abyss of gratification as we soar past the river, oceans, the stars, never to look back
Within that moment in time, I give unto you the breath of immorality as my King Tomcat
You feel the charge in your loins radiating down to your feet
The fire we blaze when the destinies of our bodies blend in heat of silken sheets
Desires, lust, entwined we are, rapture I lay at the helm of your feet
Immortal man
In your nakedness, the supreme of your body I command
My soft hands stroking the virility of ecstasy within your soul, at my will I will tenderly demand
Sniff the aphrodisiac reeking from my pores and in this realistic nocturnal romance
Undress me as I take a journey through your mind
Heighted pleasure, as you travel farther, my spirit will come as you seek, my creamy treasure you shall find
Taste upon the softness of my skin, get intoxicated off my flavor
Let it arouse you like sips of vintage wine once inside your head, your bed the feeling of me you will cum then savor
Feasting your tongue around my breasts
Mm… immortal man you do know how to make me wet
Once my ancient blood is pumping through your veins
By the full moon, you lay me upon the green pasture, and sink into my candy rain
The earth moving, shaking
Losing our souls in the chasm of our spiritual love making
Cum deep into me my immortal man
Our limbs entangled, time for us has no realm
Love bites, my breathless moans, your explicit groans sailing to the fasting of the sunrise
Easing slowly from the pleasure found between centuries of my Creole thighs
Go my love, you will kiss upon the sweetest ambrosia of Luna real soon
Where the life fore of your heart I will always rest upon past the beginning of noon
Tender kisses to you my immortal man…always
Published 21st Aug 2022
Author's Note
Nothing great in the world has ever been accomplished without passion.
Georg Wilhelm Friedrich Hegel
Dedicated to a special poet in his absence....
SKC
Georg Wilhelm Friedrich Hegel
Dedicated to a special poet in his absence....
SKC
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21st Aug 2022 00:58am
Passion you deliver in sweet spades
I love your ink
No man could ever feel less than loved,revered, and thoroughly desired while, and after, reading your words
Thank You SKC5
I love your ink
No man could ever feel less than loved,revered, and thoroughly desired while, and after, reading your words
Thank You SKC5
21st Aug 2022 1:15am
You have made me smile my Melanin King, about time you read this response may you be found in great spirits and in good health... hopefully, you have been enjoying your summer and staying safe in your daily travels.
In addition, thank you for reading...truly
Enjoy your evening and have a blessed Sunday in all you do and all you say..
In addition, thank you for reading...truly
Enjoy your evening and have a blessed Sunday in all you do and all you say..
21st Aug 2022 1:24am
21st Aug 2022 6:59am
I echo Fatboy's comment, this is a seductive poem for a woman to woo a man with. Favourite lines (I felt what they said):
You feel the charge in your loins radiating down to your feet
The fire we blaze when the destinies of our bodies blend in heat of silken sheets
Desires, lust, entwined we are, rapture I lay at the helm of your feet
Immortal man
In your nakedness, the supreme of your body I command
My soft hands stroking the virility of ecstasy within your soul, at my will I will tenderly demand
You feel the charge in your loins radiating down to your feet
The fire we blaze when the destinies of our bodies blend in heat of silken sheets
Desires, lust, entwined we are, rapture I lay at the helm of your feet
Immortal man
In your nakedness, the supreme of your body I command
My soft hands stroking the virility of ecstasy within your soul, at my will I will tenderly demand
22nd Aug 2022 00:35am
I must say I felt the energy of the person with those lines, my wise poet and thank you for selecting them in your beautiful poetic summary.
As I've always stated, you have excellent taste when it pertains to heightening the nectar of any poem, I have written, and thank you for reading.
Enjoy your week ahead..
As I've always stated, you have excellent taste when it pertains to heightening the nectar of any poem, I have written, and thank you for reading.
Enjoy your week ahead..
21st Aug 2022 3:17pm
A beautiful and comforting dedication. Definitely puts one under the spell and into good command.
22nd Aug 2022 3:23am
Mm... I must definitely agree, this poem was written for a very special poet, whom I admire, respect. I do hope this person knows he holds such a tender place in the depth of my heart, and his encouraging words softly dwindles in a peaceful and quiet place within the core of my mind, a place where my thoughts are always clear.
In a much, thank you for reading and the reflective comment, you are such a tender poet and a very honorable man to know for anyone whose path you may come cross, and don't forget, I told you that, by voice, and by a soft musing.
Love and Hugs to you, and for you... always. charmer
Have a blessed evening and relaxing upcoming week.. 👀
In a much, thank you for reading and the reflective comment, you are such a tender poet and a very honorable man to know for anyone whose path you may come cross, and don't forget, I told you that, by voice, and by a soft musing.
Love and Hugs to you, and for you... always. charmer
Have a blessed evening and relaxing upcoming week.. 👀
