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shade
hurting in the shade the sun is angered
he will have my faith
I squander the truth on the unhearing
it does nothing for a blind man, a rainbow, a promise
I keen then I pick up my metaphors and walk
sifting through my thoughts
wondering after love
I wander in its greatness
and realize I'm still too young
it is heady and unyielding
I try to catch a tornado
it twist my feelings then awaken a beast
a child woman walking in my shoes
when will I evolve?
Published 20th Aug 2022
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24th Aug 2022 4:44am
When will i indeed.
Your last line reminds me of a poem I read sometime ago. One of the lines went: 'we are monsters birthed early from a mothers womb, not yet ready to live.' I wish I could remember the author.
Your last line reminds me of a poem I read sometime ago. One of the lines went: 'we are monsters birthed early from a mothers womb, not yet ready to live.' I wish I could remember the author.
29th Aug 2022 8:22pm
"I try to catch a tornado
it twist my feelings then awaken a beast" speaking of twisters and tornadoes, it's as if the universe is talking to us all when these emotions feel exactly like that.
Nicely done.
it twist my feelings then awaken a beast" speaking of twisters and tornadoes, it's as if the universe is talking to us all when these emotions feel exactly like that.
Nicely done.
