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Hidden
In the shadows
it is where we
meet…
We’re together
on a hidden
street.
Partaking
in a love so
sweet…
You and I,
in the shadows
meet.
Nourished
by a common
desperation…
This love
becoming
our salvation.
Love blossoming
at shadow’s
edge…
Colorful hues
left
Unacknowledged.
But there’s a joy
on both our
faces…
A shared laughter
heard in these
spaces.
Love being given
within these
places…
But diligent
to leave no
traces.
it is where we
meet…
We’re together
on a hidden
street.
Partaking
in a love so
sweet…
You and I,
in the shadows
meet.
Nourished
by a common
desperation…
This love
becoming
our salvation.
Love blossoming
at shadow’s
edge…
Colorful hues
left
Unacknowledged.
But there’s a joy
on both our
faces…
A shared laughter
heard in these
spaces.
Love being given
within these
places…
But diligent
to leave no
traces.
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Re. Hidden
16th Aug 2022 5:27am
Beautifully clandestine.
Sometimes deep driving need and a kismet kind of connection, overrides...
Wonderful rhyming and flow.
I enjoyed this romantic journey
🌹B
Sometimes deep driving need and a kismet kind of connection, overrides...
Wonderful rhyming and flow.
I enjoyed this romantic journey
🌹B
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Re: Re. Hidden
16th Aug 2022 7:12am
Re: Re. Hidden
16th Aug 2022 7:32pm
Thank you for your kind words
and seeing it for what it is.
I alway enjoy seeing your comments.
~NE~
and seeing it for what it is.
I alway enjoy seeing your comments.
~NE~
Re. Hidden
16th Aug 2022 7:34pm
Re. Hidden
17th Aug 2022 7:02pm
Re. Hidden
17th Aug 2022 8:18pm
Truest appreciate the read and the comment hoping to see you again soon.
~NE~
~NE~
Re. Hidden
18th Aug 2022 7:02pm
Oh god, the thrill of hidden desires acted upon. On the street, at work, at lunch, at the park, in the graveyard, anywhere... You come together in this insane passion so visible but also so hidden. Those shadows are cast anywhere, anytime. And the desperation for the next meeting grows with every breath. Trying to leave no traces but the traces on the heart and soul are always apparent. Those shadows do not go away in the light. They stay with you until the next time. The forbidden is so absolutely addictive as you try to tell yourself it's all okay. To excuse this intense need that can only be found in the shadows. Why must we always burn... why are some things only found in the shadows...
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Re: Re. Hidden
19th Aug 2022 3:47am
Thank you for that insightful and wonderful comment. Yes you are right the desperation for the next time grows evermore intense because when you are stealing moments who knows when the next time will be. So you try to squeeze so much passion in those moments.
Needs and wants seem so amplified, desire grows exponentially and it is such a fix when you are together. It is so hard to keep such a fire hidden.
Thanks for the read
Keith
Needs and wants seem so amplified, desire grows exponentially and it is such a fix when you are together. It is so hard to keep such a fire hidden.
Thanks for the read
Keith
Re: Re. Hidden
23rd Aug 2022 7:05pm
You are quite welcome. I look forward to reading more... Sadly the chaos of my life sometimes gets in the way. And the desperation only grows always. I suppose I am just greedy, I need the touches, the kisses, to fill someone inside as they feel me. And to feel someone inside as I fill them too. That's the fix... And I don't mind keeping the hard... hidden in me.
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Re: Re. Hidden
24th Aug 2022 1:45am
You are very honest in your words and so wonderfully naughty. Who ever you are keeping the hard hidden for sure is lucky.
~NE~
~NE~
Re. Hidden
19th Aug 2022 3:48am
Thank you for stopping bye
again my friend I surely appreciate
the read.
Keith
again my friend I surely appreciate
the read.
Keith
Re. Hidden
20th Aug 2022 10:22pm
I like the rhythm, rhyme and saucy secrecy here. I don't read much love poetry, but like this because it's unsentimental.
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Re: Re. Hidden
21st Aug 2022 11:17am
Thank you so much for the read and thank you so much for taking the time to stop by.
~NE~
~NE~
Re. Hidden
23rd Aug 2022 11:32pm
I like the repetition of the line meeting in the shadows. An awesome piece through and through.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Hidden
24th Aug 2022 2:38am
I thank you you so much for that read and the lovely comment. So appreciated.
NE
NE
Re. Hidden
25th Aug 2022 1:45pm
Saucy piece hun. When someone comes into our lives at the right moment , it’s fate bringing them together for a reason. Sometimes the right person rescues us from our situations and puts a smile on our faces again. 💜💜
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Re. Hidden
25th Aug 2022 11:20pm
Thank you for the read and sharing your thoughts. It is very hard to keep hidden a light that burns brightly
in the darkness.
Notenough
in the darkness.
Notenough
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