Spanish Harlem Harem

Hahaha, Ladies in flowered prints making eyes sipping spiced rum and pulling on cigarillos. Haha as Me cleans up the low rider while listening to doo wop and vintage blues. Tight work Lady

Yep. LOL
Love the scene you got from this!! hahahaha
Got lots of floral prints as clothes. My closet is not
boring. I remember when visiting my Abuella - she would
let me sneak in a few puffs of her cigarllos when
she would sew me dresses. That is the only person who could
put my mom in her place.  Too funny.

Oh I need a long cool drink
The heat....phew
Great write
Love and light
Ron x

Hey Ron - My Sugar Skull:)

Right - I need a drink too but for
now I'm sipping on
some Mexican coffee with
lots of crema (cream in Spanish) hahahaha

so glad you enjoyed!!!!

Not far from where I live but still a million miles away as the crow flies....
You've painted a vivid picture with non-stop verve and vibe.
You're in your magic world Adel, a mighty fine place to be.
Now I want some candied yams and a pitcher full of spiced rum drinks and turn that damn thumping music UP

BIG LIKE

Hey PS.

The opening of the song gave me that vibe with the bass.
Lots of sex appeal and the bronze color just shined
in my  mind. Walking around in seductive dresses not looking too innocent with heavy mischief eyeliner. hahahaha

Thanks for the RL and stopping by amigo:)

Perfection, pure and simple! I'm loving it! You definitely have a way with words and this one is proof of that. May we have more from you in your magic words?  It's magic, I agree with PS.

Hi Faith!!!

What an amazing comment:) Thank you so much.
Coming from you amiga - it means the world.
Love to paint scenes with poetry. Happy to take you on my
magic carpet ride:)

Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)

You are most welcome! I'm ready for that magic carpet Ride.

easy,    
smoke filled  
blues called out  
high pitched and mellow  
the wallow    
carrying  
attune to our heart    
 
whiskey spills from her eyelids    
transversed from a future    
strapped to my stares    
 
the music mesmorized    
englassed,  rewound    
excitement without end

Hey Tim!!!

How to respond!!!  
You freaking rock amigo. hahaha

Whiskey spills from her eyes!!! Awesomazing!!!
Your whole kick ass comment gave me a big toothy smile:)
Loved it!!!  

Thanks you so so much for stopping by and leaving  
this work of art:)

I can see and feel it!
It has a beat just like the song 🎵

Hi NG!!

So happy to see your beautiful face on my page:)
I heard the opening of this song - with the bass - I was
transported there.  When I get that spark from a song
I keep it on loop and start writing.

I'm obsessed with this song!!! hahaha

Thinking about all of my friends I grew up
with always in trouble and at the pool. LOL

Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)

I love the thump of bass guitar.  Bass players don't get the glory. But without that thump, a band sounds like a cheap radio.
And your lyrical output here keeps with that depth.  Where the soul gets pushed into the grooves of the city.  

Nice beat. Awesome lyrics!

Hi Styx:)

I totally agree about bass guitarists. It gives
rhythm and makes you bob your head right.
Before you know it the rest of you starts
grooving in tune with the song.  
For me the world disappears - the switch is flipped - and I go somewhere else:)

Thanks for your snaps on my lyrics buddy:)
Hope you're having a great Saturday!!

Hey Relic:)

Right, kept bobbing my head while writing. LOL
Okay, Relic cards on the table - do you have a band.
Guitar - drums?  I think it is so awesome that you are musically
inclined. You know I hear drummers are trouble. hahahaha
Like to hit things and stuff.  

The silver man reminds me of David Bowie in a way.

Thank you for the RL and commenting.
So excited I got a drummer friend!!!!

That is awesome!!  So happy for you - bet it
was an amazing experience.

Couch cushions!!
I've smacked a few people with those.
Then quickly ran out of the room. hahaha

Later gator:)

Hoi hoi
All the possibilities of a lovely song.
Bet you don’t need The Neighbourhood’s thumping.
You can do it all by yourself.
Let someone make the backing track and sing it with all the breath you can muster.
It’ll be just wonderful, believe me!

Like it a lot!
Kind regards, Gus

Hey Gus:)

Awh man, Me - no performer. I would go blank
and keep forgetting my lyrics. LOL
I'm a writer at heart:) Love the escape of it.

But the fact that you gave me a two thumbs
up on this means the world amigo:)

Thanks for all of the snaps amigo:)

Hoi hoi
Nowadays no one has to perform if that person doesn’t want to.

I have a friend. She only sings, but does that very good. Some friend (or even on YouTube) make backings for her. A backing is the mix of instruments that plays the sound to sing to.

She uses Smule to be able to fit her words in the music and the smart phone’s microphone to sing in.

Or ask around among your friends for someone who has a small bed room recording studio.

If you want to hear what that sounds like, check out @FaithMairee’s (DUP) song called loving me.

In general:
Count to 4 and get kicking.
Instant happiness.
Why not give it a try?

I will definitely check it out.
Love Faith Mairee!

Finding fulfillment in ruin, as my good friend KristinaX said it in another poem.
Enjoyed the easy lyricism.

Hi Mark!!

Yes, fulfillment in ruin. But also so happy and at home
you don't even realize it cause you're surrounded by love
of community, friends and family:)  Especially
through the bad times.

Love KristinaX:) Great writer with a happy soul:)

Thanks for stopping by with  comment - glad to see you back on the site again:)

You gave life to the rhythm and you
made it breathe, A...  :)

A most righteous application of the elements...

Hi Cipher

Thank you. What a lovely comment:)
So happy you enjoyed it. just wanted to write
about me and all of my rowdy friends back
in the day. Hanging at the pool smelling like
banana boat sun tan lotion while putting on
our make-up. Hahahaha
Good times!!!!

Wow, that first stanza totally pulled me in. I want to go dancing now. "Playing in their pulse, Hypnotizing the air, Forgetting who you are" That is so perfect, when the music really takes you and in his hands you spin and push your body against his, oh yes feeling it pulsating. Becoming slaves to the music, song, and each other. Satin waves softly moving through you in a rough pattern. 'Never behaving' lol, yes that's about the extent of it. Giving him what he wants, perhaps a harem for two. So perfect... Agree with what everyone else said, you are perfection. Your words are so vivid, you can always see them materialize in the most gorgeous ways.

Hey Chica:)

You totally got it. hahahaha.
Yes, music has power - at least for me it does.
Loved dancing with partners who could match my
steps when we would go to dances.
Mostly Quineaneras. When I got older we would go
cruising on main street. Good times!!!

Very hot women indeed, including yourself.  Keep on writing.

Well hello Francisco:)

Thank you so much!
Glad you enjoyed amigo.

Yes I did enjoy it senorita.

Ah, your Latina hot blood pulsating in rhythm with the guitar. The men slack jawed as they lustfully gaze at the beauty and grace you display.  The motions, curves and sway in harmony. The sexual energy so strong it could charge the phones in their pockets.

You and your lady friends dance together with passion and pride for yourselves and each other. The “vida” of the community!

Hi Leo,

What an awesome comment!!!
Thank you so much. Look at all of those visuals you just
gave me. hahahaha.
You totally felt where I was going with this:)
Good times for sure.

Thanks for visiting and commenting amigo:)
So happy you enjoyed!!