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Positively Mesmerizing
You are positively
Mesmerizing
Is it any wonder
That I have
A crush on you?
You're cool
Kind of quirky
It's no secret
That I am
Stuck on you!
And yes...
I have a major
Crush on you
Because you're beautiful
Mostly because you're you!
Mesmerizing
Is it any wonder
That I have
A crush on you?
You're cool
Kind of quirky
It's no secret
That I am
Stuck on you!
And yes...
I have a major
Crush on you
Because you're beautiful
Mostly because you're you!
Published 11th Aug 2022
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11th Aug 2022 10:13am
I enjoyed this. Having a crush can be so much fun and so delicious.
I like your pen and the style that flows from it.
I like your pen and the style that flows from it.
11th Aug 2022 10:17am
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11th Aug 2022 11:53am
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11th Aug 2022 12:06pm
11th Aug 2022 8:49pm
Nice. Caught myself almost singing your lines as if they were song lyrics. Beautiful message.
12th Aug 2022 3:39am
How lovely! You have a way of making me feel like a million bucks and I thank you!
13th Aug 2022 00:07am
13th Aug 2022 8:43am
Yes, I would love that! Jilted Johnny on here has put a couple of my poems/song to music in the recent past. They are MP3's anyone can listen to on SoundCloud. I would love to do the same thing with you sometime. Have a great weekend!
13th Aug 2022 8:33pm
Had fun with the first step in our little project. "I Have a Crush on You" just posted under Song Lyrics. Please make suggestions:)
13th Aug 2022 9:55pm
12th Aug 2022 3:18am
12th Aug 2022 3:21am
Thank you so much for your gracious comments. I am very appreciative of them.
12th Aug 2022 6:08am
Ms. Brigham,
My name is Sandals and I stopped threw to tell u about thy awesome poetic ah float. This piece is positively mesmerizing as well. The honesty as u speak within this ah poem brings out the eye catch within. Thank u for thy time ma'am!
My name is Sandals and I stopped threw to tell u about thy awesome poetic ah float. This piece is positively mesmerizing as well. The honesty as u speak within this ah poem brings out the eye catch within. Thank u for thy time ma'am!
12th Aug 2022 8:34am
Mr. Robinson,
You honor me with your lovely comments and I thank you for that. It's always a treat to know when someone is appreciative of something that I have written. You have my deep gratitude.
You honor me with your lovely comments and I thank you for that. It's always a treat to know when someone is appreciative of something that I have written. You have my deep gratitude.
12th Aug 2022 1:00pm
12th Aug 2022 10:22am
Hoi hoi
Even if I only read your work and push the ‘like’ button, I only do that because the ‘I love it to pieces’ button is missing.
Kind regards, Gus
Even if I only read your work and push the ‘like’ button, I only do that because the ‘I love it to pieces’ button is missing.
Kind regards, Gus
13th Aug 2022 8:51am
Hi, Gus! You just made my heart smile when I read this. I have a deep respect and admiration for you, Gus! I know have said it before but having music put to my song lyrics as you have done for me is a dream come true. I have wanted it for forty plus years. That is why I a lot of gratitude towards you! Have a wonderful weekend and happy travels. I know you will be doing that very soon!
