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good afternoon dearest Jay thank you graciously for the very thoughtful and beautiful comment 💕

it seems like jealousy and love sometimes pairs up

thank you graciously dearest poet for reading like it or not sometimes it does 💕

Wonderfully written. Even with the controlled angst throughout it.  

"I am shiny in the pain but fade come daylight"  --excellent line!!  

You have an "a" in that line you don't need.  Between "am" and "shiny".  But that is a kick ass line!  The while thing is done well, but I love that line especially.
Great job!

good evening dearest Styxian thank you for the love here and your poetry eyes for catching my error I'm good for leaving words out of changing train of thought without catching it... I deeply appreciate you for telling me 💕

Well my primary point was to tell you how much I like this write!  

I make errors too, we all do.  But thats why we look out for one another!  

you're kind I never would have noticed it I rarely go back and read unless one comments much later on and I've forgotten the poem then I'll catch them sometimes thank you again 💕

It can be hurtful when you share your body and mind, heart and soul... and someone still has that urge to keep searching for the next conquest. And in these meaningless interactions they still think of you, know you will be there or else they would not do it. But when they lose you is when they truly slip into that dark place and they try so hard to get you back. Having felt the fairy dust realizing it is lost forever. That it will never be the same... feeling the loss of that love deeply and forever. Perhaps you will forgive, perhaps you even did the same. Because every person has those urges sometimes, still you can always tell something happened. Was it worth it? I suppose each person has to decide but so often something is lost... I am not a saint, and I have never met one but I think almost everyone can understand this one from both perspectives. People just don't like to admit it, after all everyone is a saint somehow in their own mind. But jealousy is a knife that cuts deep and everyone involved ends up wounded even when something like this did not happen. When jealousy is used as a means of control you grow further apart and trust is something that's very difficult to get back.

you bear an impacting message here which should be noted by most.
I was intrigued how the ending runs a bit parallel in concept with SkullnXbone hand,
yet coming from different angles

"until the next fascination hexes" I like this line in sense that speaks to many of us who at one time would move from one to the next, that short attention span.
Well crafted.