Maybe....Perhaps

It has been too long... far far too long... since I've swung around your way to take in your words. I love your play with sounds and rhythm, and the way it makes me want to both read it slowly and push ahead to see what's waiting next. This was a treat. It's left me smiling. And wondering. Exactly, I think, what you intended. :-)

Mission accomplished. This vibe was more about sexuality,sexiness, sensuality and approach than actual sex. Foreplay takes many forms. I'm so glad this vibe translated with you.  Much respect 🙏

Hey there, Naajir
 I think your poetic voice here is gorgeously intended... from the format to the smooth feel and timbre; your poem totally reads as a bit of jazz across the page to me. (like you mention within) It's beautifully heady and delightfully unexpected; pulling the reader in and taking them to places you're surprised by but ultimately find yourself totally falling for and WANTING to bask deep... in that uniquely driving groove.  

What an Excellent early morning start to my day!
Thanks so much for sharing this 'songscape'  

I think I'll have to listen to some jazz on my drive! ;p
🌹 - B
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I'm so appreciative of your insights on this vibe , B. I wanted it to linger the same way it actually lingers inside of me. I wanted to be as authentic and as sensual as possible with closure nesting in the imagination of the reader [ including myself  ]

Your beguiling musings are so beautiful in its poetic reflection, my King. Your wonderous ink spills tend to allure the readers in animated suspension giving us mere glimpses of ethos and pathos blended perfectly, in the end, you are left with so many variations of interpreting as your mind renders from your presented catharsis.

Please enjoy your Thursday...and be safe and wise in your journey.

" ethos and pathos blended perfectly " . Yeah and yes. It's been a while since I was able to blend the two. I think that space is intrinsic to any writer regardless of genre. Leaving it open ended moves the creative spirit into the wilderness of what it is to be human. To be orgasmic and organic ,even in such a limited context as this, is always a treasure to behold. Thank you for your thought provoking comments, Sweetness. As always. much respect

You are humbly welcome, and worthy...

Dude everytime you kick it you have that Barry White vibe. We learned of Barry and the great balladeers at a young age. Your poetry always take us to that music and those times. Tight

Oh boy! what a start... watching so eager to have one... ;)
Oh yeah, got to keep that calm, only increases the desire.
And the commentary, mmmm....
More than subliminally soaking. Physically soaking too.
Stroking my intellect, oh yes... seeking, succeeded. lol
One word at a time building...
Waiting to play the victim, damn! oh yeah! absolutely.
Bracing for those hard slaps, so wet and ready.
Made for this role, and any other as well.
Needing those victory laps inside so desperately.
But made to wait. Yearning dripping from inside.
Unable to conceal the thrill.
That desire to be stretched and punished in every way.
In the mouth, in the ... Oh the throbbing.
Innocence needs to be punished, deviousness too.
The best porno is the one you create yourselves.
Sensations that are so much more...
Choking and sinking deep, damn! I am so worked up now.
Aching with raw feminine spontaneity.
Wow, that's some write you got there Naajir.

I appreciate you going back into my X files , Kristina.
And I'm glad you enjoyed the journey, and got all worked up.
Comments such as this from an esteemed poetess such as yourself
always fill me with inspiration. Big thx for droppin by!!