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Autumn
Leaves once green turn
brown, fires burn; kids
return to schools.
Weather cools and
rain pools on the land.
brown, fires burn; kids
return to schools.
Weather cools and
rain pools on the land.
Published 2nd Aug 2022
Author's Note
First attempt at a Ya-du
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3rd Aug 2022 00:10am
You describe Autumn beautifully in ink and it's almost here hehe... nice drop!
3rd Aug 2022 00:12am
Thank you! I don't like Autumn at ALL, but this form is usually about a season and I always write about Spring! So I thought I'd try.
3rd Aug 2022 1:02am
4th Aug 2022 5:59am
U know what? This is really autumn here in the states of the united. Very to the point work.
