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The Thread
The thread it pulls
Unravels the whole
The standard, the steady
The thread extends further and further
As it dishevels what it’s withered
But that thread can then create
Something new
Acceptable and fresh
Shrinking into the creation’s flourishes
Dishevelling the concern of the withered
Unravels the whole
The standard, the steady
The thread extends further and further
As it dishevels what it’s withered
But that thread can then create
Something new
Acceptable and fresh
Shrinking into the creation’s flourishes
Dishevelling the concern of the withered
Published 23rd Mar 2012
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2012 9:23pm
LeesAngel,
Awesome way to put it! To breath new life into the dicarded. Great write!
tornado
Awesome way to put it! To breath new life into the dicarded. Great write!
tornado
23rd Mar 2012 9:27pm
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27th Mar 2012 8:30pm
Perception and attitude count for a lot! The best of a contradiction: that which brings together can also tear apart. Wonderful symbolism here!
27th Mar 2012 8:34pm
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27th Mar 2012 8:35pm
Thanx alot, it's funny cuz that's not how the idea started in my head, n it ended that way lol!!!!!!!!
28th Mar 2012 9:59am
Even I got this one :o) :o)
I think this poetry lark is starting to rub off on me, lol
Resurrection from ones death into something reborn.. Lol :o)
I think this poetry lark is starting to rub off on me, lol
Resurrection from ones death into something reborn.. Lol :o)
28th Mar 2012 10:05am
lol!!!!!!!!!!!! well u knew itd eventually hit u lol!!!!!!!!!! but its just a positive way of thinking i suppose!!!!!!!!!
28th Apr 2012 1:12am
Dear LeesAngle
Nothing is ever lost in nature ... it just becomes something else ... as it has been stated our atoms were once a part of the stars. A great read that describes these thoughts in a few words ... I liked ... Love and Peace ... Bruce
Nothing is ever lost in nature ... it just becomes something else ... as it has been stated our atoms were once a part of the stars. A great read that describes these thoughts in a few words ... I liked ... Love and Peace ... Bruce
28th Apr 2012 7:31pm
