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30 words of Mysteriously Surviving
the door matt
the shoulder
the fixer
the broken
the listener
the violated
the addicted
the lover
the devoted mother
the loyal wife
this is me, this is my life
the shoulder
the fixer
the broken
the listener
the violated
the addicted
the lover
the devoted mother
the loyal wife
this is me, this is my life
Published 30th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Thats not even the beginning, if you know me then you know this is for the who are you? comp
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30th Jul 2022 8:18am
1st Sep 2022 2:20am
30th Jul 2022 9:46am
1st Sep 2022 2:21am
theres ore, just hit the pints that seemed relevant. LOL Cheers! Its Vodka night! <3
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30th Jul 2022 10:37am
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1st Sep 2022 2:20am
31st Jul 2022 8:10am
Dear ML,
And this doesn’t even scratch the surface to be sure. I love the descriptives used and wish you all the best in the comp. H🌷
And this doesn’t even scratch the surface to be sure. I love the descriptives used and wish you all the best in the comp. H🌷
1st Sep 2022 2:22am
You got that totally correct. not even a scratch. LOL thanks for always being a supporter. Love you honey. <3
18th Aug 2022 8:34pm
Thank you for your entry! I definitely learned a lot about you because you packed so much into your 30 words. Helpful critique: I like the approach and completely understand the style you were going for, but I maybe wouldn't have used 'the' so many times. You could have omitted it, varied it, or just saved the words to say something else instead. I liked it though!
1st Sep 2022 2:23am
