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Dreams Don't Decieve
Your mind bluffs
But dreams won't
Let you go,
They'll sort
Out chaos
Wit creates,
Hesitate
Only when
You can't spout
Because doubts
Of others
Stone your speech,
Yet you're free
To see sun
Risings truth.
But dreams won't
Let you go,
They'll sort
Out chaos
Wit creates,
Hesitate
Only when
You can't spout
Because doubts
Of others
Stone your speech,
Yet you're free
To see sun
Risings truth.
Published 30th Jul 2022
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30th Jul 2022 4:00am
Most excellent... I very much like the topic of dreams...
You approached it from a fascinating angle...
The last stanza sealed the poem perfectly...
You approached it from a fascinating angle...
The last stanza sealed the poem perfectly...
Oh thank you, Cipher! Much pleased you like this theme and how I presented it pluses the RL add. woowee
30th Jul 2022 12:15pm
31st Jul 2022 10:43pm
Thanks so much, LDF!! Much appreciations for your read and comment. ox Kat
2nd Aug 2022 9:40pm
Very cool LB. My dreams usually either consist of solving problems or sex. :p The problem solving ones can get real weird but that's not surprising because I am pretty weird. lol Still you made me think of all those times I woke up thinking what the hell was that all about. And all I wanted to do was get back in there to see what happens. :)
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