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Slim
I've always been a man of substance
A few extravagant appetites, my whip is tite
I always get what I want baby
In heat, always hungry like the wolf
I've been known to "feed" all damn night
Luvin' my 3-wide life!
Seeking out sistas built like African Queens
Breast filled with the milk of the motherlands,
Waist that narrow to Euphrates delta
Hips and thighs that triangulize
the place that give's birth to kings
Always wet, fertile-wide open......peaceful
......then I met you, Slim.
Sexy, sassy-a "round the way girl"
Never saw it coming, you were positioned
to rock my whole, damned world!
.....(and you did)
Talking that smack 24-7!
All day, everyday.
Babygirl can handle her bizness
From the streets to the bedroom
perfectly in everyway
She's a supernova
Burning brightly, white hot
always packin' heat
She works hard, she plays even harder
She's cummin' for real
In my throne room
In between these king sized satin sheets
There, we lay. A sweet , unexpected experience
We shared a particularly passionate quest
Laying together kissing, tasting, touching
Fingers entangled in hair
Sucking full swollen nipples
standing tall upon her slight breast
......mmmmmm, I love those tender morsels
....and everything I've ever been told about "slim girls" so true.
Her passion, her hunger-insaitiable
Her luv deep and wet
You never reach the bottom of her delicious
"Bitches Brew"
(....and did I say this brother is hung low, heavy structured)
Slim, you took me down-lawd have mercy
You are one purdy, sexy-azz, fine muthafucka'
(....I mean that in the most complimentary way) : )
Your presence has captured my mind baby.
From the perfect "do" atop ur head
following those sharp, dangerous curves of your body
back up from your most pretty demure feet
riding the shapes of your calves,
captivated by the slight "bow" of your legs
That inviting space between your sinewy thighs
not to mention that
sexy
round
behind............
.....tight like a sweet juicy Georgia peach. You got me loosing my damned mind!
I love "the way you move"
The way you straddle my body baby.
Riding this big black stallion of a man like a pro.
Stayed in the saddle the full 8 seconds
I hear the bell ringing; I feel your body letting go
So sensual, so sexy, so erotic the way body starts to cum
So lithe, so small juxtaposed this big black man
Trembling, your core like a hot liquid fire
Your hips slowly grind against my body like fine coffee
Damn, how you make me moan...
....fulfilling my strong desire
...to know you Slim.
You pretty girl are such a wonder
I'm truly diggin' your style
Damn, you got a beautiful smile......when you smile
I see you don't share that with just anyone
Selfishly, I'd like to think that I put that there
Probing the depths
Sharing with me a story that everybody don't get to share...
....with you
"I'm all for you, Papi" you whisper in my ear
Then I flip your gentle flower towards my lips
You nectar flows upon my face, between your thighs
as I wrap my big hand around your tiny hips
It's becoming crystal clear that....
you've captured me, enraptured me
Body and Soul
The proverbial "Slim Goody"
More than a wonder to behold.
A few extravagant appetites, my whip is tite
I always get what I want baby
In heat, always hungry like the wolf
I've been known to "feed" all damn night
Luvin' my 3-wide life!
Seeking out sistas built like African Queens
Breast filled with the milk of the motherlands,
Waist that narrow to Euphrates delta
Hips and thighs that triangulize
the place that give's birth to kings
Always wet, fertile-wide open......peaceful
......then I met you, Slim.
Sexy, sassy-a "round the way girl"
Never saw it coming, you were positioned
to rock my whole, damned world!
.....(and you did)
Talking that smack 24-7!
All day, everyday.
Babygirl can handle her bizness
From the streets to the bedroom
perfectly in everyway
She's a supernova
Burning brightly, white hot
always packin' heat
She works hard, she plays even harder
She's cummin' for real
In my throne room
In between these king sized satin sheets
There, we lay. A sweet , unexpected experience
We shared a particularly passionate quest
Laying together kissing, tasting, touching
Fingers entangled in hair
Sucking full swollen nipples
standing tall upon her slight breast
......mmmmmm, I love those tender morsels
....and everything I've ever been told about "slim girls" so true.
Her passion, her hunger-insaitiable
Her luv deep and wet
You never reach the bottom of her delicious
"Bitches Brew"
(....and did I say this brother is hung low, heavy structured)
Slim, you took me down-lawd have mercy
You are one purdy, sexy-azz, fine muthafucka'
(....I mean that in the most complimentary way) : )
Your presence has captured my mind baby.
From the perfect "do" atop ur head
following those sharp, dangerous curves of your body
back up from your most pretty demure feet
riding the shapes of your calves,
captivated by the slight "bow" of your legs
That inviting space between your sinewy thighs
not to mention that
sexy
round
behind............
.....tight like a sweet juicy Georgia peach. You got me loosing my damned mind!
I love "the way you move"
The way you straddle my body baby.
Riding this big black stallion of a man like a pro.
Stayed in the saddle the full 8 seconds
I hear the bell ringing; I feel your body letting go
So sensual, so sexy, so erotic the way body starts to cum
So lithe, so small juxtaposed this big black man
Trembling, your core like a hot liquid fire
Your hips slowly grind against my body like fine coffee
Damn, how you make me moan...
....fulfilling my strong desire
...to know you Slim.
You pretty girl are such a wonder
I'm truly diggin' your style
Damn, you got a beautiful smile......when you smile
I see you don't share that with just anyone
Selfishly, I'd like to think that I put that there
Probing the depths
Sharing with me a story that everybody don't get to share...
....with you
"I'm all for you, Papi" you whisper in my ear
Then I flip your gentle flower towards my lips
You nectar flows upon my face, between your thighs
as I wrap my big hand around your tiny hips
It's becoming crystal clear that....
you've captured me, enraptured me
Body and Soul
The proverbial "Slim Goody"
More than a wonder to behold.
Published 23rd Mar 2012
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2012 5:30pm
MusicallyMrM,
"Slim, you took me down-lawd have mercy
You are one purdy, sexy-azz, fine muthafucka'"
Damn! You are rolling phat on this one! Awesome trip.
tornado
"Slim, you took me down-lawd have mercy
You are one purdy, sexy-azz, fine muthafucka'"
Damn! You are rolling phat on this one! Awesome trip.
tornado
23rd Mar 2012 5:35pm
LOL (rolling up a tree, taking a toke passing off to Windy-T) Thanks my Brotha 8^)
23rd Mar 2012 7:15pm
Every slim lady out there should read this, u just made them proud. This is simply hot and wicked!!!
24th Mar 2012 4:00am
Im not slim but its a very beautiful poem!!!
I love "the way you move"
The way you straddle my body baby.
Riding this big black stallion of a man like a pro.
Stayed in the saddle the full 8 seconds
I hear the bell ringing; I feel your body letting go
I love "the way you move"
The way you straddle my body baby.
Riding this big black stallion of a man like a pro.
Stayed in the saddle the full 8 seconds
I hear the bell ringing; I feel your body letting go
24th Mar 2012 4:02am
Capturing the beauty of it makes you pretty beautiful too.
"Seeking out sistas built like African Queens
Breast filled with the milk of the motherlands,
Waist that narrow to Euphrates delta
Hips and thighs that triangulize
the place that give's birth to kings
Always wet, fertile-wide open......peaceful" ; )
"Seeking out sistas built like African Queens
Breast filled with the milk of the motherlands,
Waist that narrow to Euphrates delta
Hips and thighs that triangulize
the place that give's birth to kings
Always wet, fertile-wide open......peaceful" ; )
24th Mar 2012 2:08am
"you've captured me, enraptured me
Body and Soul"..........Never under estimate the power of a woman!
Size doesn't always matter! As long as your able to moan and groan and release honey from your honeycomb. Plus, feel the intimacy and love.
Music, this is one hell of a write. Slim has you right where you need to be. ;)
I do believe that most men run from slim women, because they're not able to completely satisfy a slim woman's needs! LOL!
Body and Soul"..........Never under estimate the power of a woman!
Size doesn't always matter! As long as your able to moan and groan and release honey from your honeycomb. Plus, feel the intimacy and love.
Music, this is one hell of a write. Slim has you right where you need to be. ;)
I do believe that most men run from slim women, because they're not able to completely satisfy a slim woman's needs! LOL!
24th Mar 2012 4:04am
Most big guys fear "hurting" the petite ones. Had a bad experince with a small sista once. Didn't hurt her but.......she surely hurt me physically and emotionally. Have to share that sometimes : (
My exterior is that of a Georgia peach
My interior lays a Bahamian Queen
Who in bed is the meanest of them all.....
MusicallyMrM you so sweet, your words send me into heat. As I read the words off of this paper, wishing I could met its maker
Slim yes that I am you just made me a fan
This poem sends chills up and down my spine
Wondering what it would be like to have you hitting it from behind, that I wont mind
You digging deep in my guts making me cuss.......
As you rise up from my nectar, my juices are reflecting
There's no end to the fun that has just begun
You flip my ass over and insert your hard shift into my slick slit. I put a dip in my back, my ass in the air, you smiling from ear to ear
As I bounce my ass back & forth on your dick
You grip my ass by the waist, trying to hold me in place, I look back with a devilish smile and whisper it's ok u can spank it don't be afraid I wont bite
you slap my ass, it sends ripple waves like we're in the ocean. You say damn baby I like your moves & your motion ooo........you so wet I see why the call you flex. My rose juices run down your stiff rod showing that your in charge mmm.......I like the way that looks, it turns me on, I just want to lick it
I jump off your dick and let my tongue do the talking. Your cock, my mouth, & tongue go to wrestling. You grab my neck, as your toes start to curl, you release down my throat, as you began to float off into ecstasy. I'll have you believing this can be realty, this has got to be a fantasy. This Slim, Sexy, Sassy, round the way girl would rock your world ;-)
My interior lays a Bahamian Queen
Who in bed is the meanest of them all.....
MusicallyMrM you so sweet, your words send me into heat. As I read the words off of this paper, wishing I could met its maker
Slim yes that I am you just made me a fan
This poem sends chills up and down my spine
Wondering what it would be like to have you hitting it from behind, that I wont mind
You digging deep in my guts making me cuss.......
As you rise up from my nectar, my juices are reflecting
There's no end to the fun that has just begun
You flip my ass over and insert your hard shift into my slick slit. I put a dip in my back, my ass in the air, you smiling from ear to ear
As I bounce my ass back & forth on your dick
You grip my ass by the waist, trying to hold me in place, I look back with a devilish smile and whisper it's ok u can spank it don't be afraid I wont bite
you slap my ass, it sends ripple waves like we're in the ocean. You say damn baby I like your moves & your motion ooo........you so wet I see why the call you flex. My rose juices run down your stiff rod showing that your in charge mmm.......I like the way that looks, it turns me on, I just want to lick it
I jump off your dick and let my tongue do the talking. Your cock, my mouth, & tongue go to wrestling. You grab my neck, as your toes start to curl, you release down my throat, as you began to float off into ecstasy. I'll have you believing this can be realty, this has got to be a fantasy. This Slim, Sexy, Sassy, round the way girl would rock your world ;-)
24th Mar 2012 3:49pm
Speak those words Mami!! You need to post this one up as a poem itself. Strong, impassioned words for a "Slim Goody". Thank You Lady C : )
24th Mar 2012 4:30pm
Wonderful homage to lovely sisters out there! My favorite part is, "Luvin' my 3-wide life!
Seeking out sistas built like African Queens
Breast filled with the milk of the motherlands,
Waist that narrow to Euphrates delta
Hips and thighs that triangulize
the place that give's birth to kings
Always wet, fertile-wide open......peaceful".
This could easily be placed in some kind of showcase celebrating the fairer sex. Think this is the first I have seen a nod to Miles Davis in a poem! See you got OutKast in the mix as well. I confess you extended my vocabulary. (Had yo look up "Slim Goody")
Stupendous write!
Seeking out sistas built like African Queens
Breast filled with the milk of the motherlands,
Waist that narrow to Euphrates delta
Hips and thighs that triangulize
the place that give's birth to kings
Always wet, fertile-wide open......peaceful".
This could easily be placed in some kind of showcase celebrating the fairer sex. Think this is the first I have seen a nod to Miles Davis in a poem! See you got OutKast in the mix as well. I confess you extended my vocabulary. (Had yo look up "Slim Goody")
Stupendous write!
24th Mar 2012 4:34pm
Jazz, I am always impressed when intelligent minds pick up on the cultural allusions I place in my writing. I think it's awesome to be able to set the eros mind a blaze without having to be crass, vulgar or ignorant. Just saying........ : )
24th Mar 2012 4:49pm
That is indeed the challenge between writing for the sake of having words down versus coming up with something that deserves to be read. I will be optimistic (maybe foolishly so) in hoping that it also has to do at least partially with maturity!
24th Mar 2012 5:03pm
26th Mar 2012 6:36am
Ok first I have to say that I looooved it when I came to your page almost everything was extreme content.. Then I click and see a beautiful black woman oh so sensually sitting with that body.. mmmmmm.. Then how incrediably deep and far you took it.. I'm sold!! Masterpieces always come with a warning sign.. Beautiful!
28th Mar 2012 11:53pm
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Yep'r
Forget Jack, sometimes it pays to advertise. Caught this read by accident under the umbrella of Destiny
Real Deal Right thar...Diggin the flow; for an extended piece it was right in and up to the moment
Some adult-unadulterated sex-a-vision. Nice read champ, enjoyed that thing
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Yep'r
Forget Jack, sometimes it pays to advertise. Caught this read by accident under the umbrella of Destiny
Real Deal Right thar...Diggin the flow; for an extended piece it was right in and up to the moment
Some adult-unadulterated sex-a-vision. Nice read champ, enjoyed that thing
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4th Apr 2012 8:12am
This is so hot.
It's like I'm getting rich by the luxury in this poem.
Make me your whore.
Nice one Mr. M.
It's like I'm getting rich by the luxury in this poem.
Make me your whore.
Nice one Mr. M.
17th Apr 2012 1:59am
9th Aug 2012 8:49pm
Juicy, a sensual diamond in the rough if you will. This poem has alot of presence. Keep it up.
15th Jan 2013 6:26pm
15th Jan 2013 6:41pm
To be written about.............all the songs, the stories the poems, movies, documentaries penned about "Rain"
(Don't tell anyone, but I've "personally" read a few odes to beautiful u) : )
Thanks for the read babygirl.
(Don't tell anyone, but I've "personally" read a few odes to beautiful u) : )
Thanks for the read babygirl.
