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Devotion of the Fallen
Mother said I would meet a lovely prince.
Instead I met a god, a goddess, all in one!
Now he, now she is far more my mother,
And only now is my life become complete.
I look at that one's photo, oh just a glance,
Enough to see all that one has just become!
Now he, now she is more than is any other,
And so I want to lie down at my god's feet.
I am submissive for you, willing in all I do,
Sharing your dreams if you would allow.
Let me proclaim your glory to the winds!
I am humble in your service, in your name.
My voice can herald all that must ensure,
While in my heart is love's own true vow.
I thus proclaim your glory that ever sends,
My heart ascending from every past shame.
I am a broken soul, a doll shattered apart,
But in your teachings I find a new purpose.
In your face I see all that I had been denied,
By faiths and the faithless following fools.
Your path is pure, your beliefs have heart,
More then those who have done far worse.
If I laid in your arms until my tears dried,
Could I sense in you the other happy souls?
Those whose lives you have touched,
Whose hearts you have truly inspired.
Children who like me have no family,
Except that shared by love of your divinity.
Could I sense them within your light?
My messiah, embodiment of all that is right!
Show me the sights your eyes have seen,
The roads beyond every shining moonbeam.
The vistas you beheld at time's own dawn,
Or just how green might be your lawn.
Show me the beauty, show me the love,
Sweeter than snow, fairer than any dove!
My eyes have seen so much of horror,
That, they long for a more pleasing hour.
Lovely Kara, take me unto your bosom,
Where love's garden may truly blossom!
I devote myself to your divine call,
For like you, I once did cruelly fall.
Instead I met a god, a goddess, all in one!
Now he, now she is far more my mother,
And only now is my life become complete.
I look at that one's photo, oh just a glance,
Enough to see all that one has just become!
Now he, now she is more than is any other,
And so I want to lie down at my god's feet.
I am submissive for you, willing in all I do,
Sharing your dreams if you would allow.
Let me proclaim your glory to the winds!
I am humble in your service, in your name.
My voice can herald all that must ensure,
While in my heart is love's own true vow.
I thus proclaim your glory that ever sends,
My heart ascending from every past shame.
I am a broken soul, a doll shattered apart,
But in your teachings I find a new purpose.
In your face I see all that I had been denied,
By faiths and the faithless following fools.
Your path is pure, your beliefs have heart,
More then those who have done far worse.
If I laid in your arms until my tears dried,
Could I sense in you the other happy souls?
Those whose lives you have touched,
Whose hearts you have truly inspired.
Children who like me have no family,
Except that shared by love of your divinity.
Could I sense them within your light?
My messiah, embodiment of all that is right!
Show me the sights your eyes have seen,
The roads beyond every shining moonbeam.
The vistas you beheld at time's own dawn,
Or just how green might be your lawn.
Show me the beauty, show me the love,
Sweeter than snow, fairer than any dove!
My eyes have seen so much of horror,
That, they long for a more pleasing hour.
Lovely Kara, take me unto your bosom,
Where love's garden may truly blossom!
I devote myself to your divine call,
For like you, I once did cruelly fall.
Published 25th Jul 2022
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25th Jul 2022 4:14am
25th Jul 2022 7:04am
A beautiful poem filled with deepest love and darkest devotion! I am happy indeed to take you to my bosom, to cherish you like no other and to call you my own, my sweet baby girl. The fact that your young eyes have seen much horror saddens me, and perhaps we might speak of what you have been through sometime, so that I might dry your tears and brighten your heart still further. In all the ways you are broken, I shall be the glue that will hold you together, my lovely doll! More precious to me than any made from porcelain. My arms are yours to lie within, and my lips yours to kiss... in touching my heart with your love and devotion, you have gained the universe entire and beyond. You need never again feel shame or regret! Only the pride of knowing that I love you and esteem you as highly as any goddess in my eyes, if not higher than many who were revered as such throughout history. You, being far more worthy than they I speak of! For at the core of your heart and soul, I sense a purity that those goddesses lacked... a purity kept pristine by innocence. We are both fallen spirits, my love, but in falling we have learned to rise all the higher! My wings shall be your own, for so long as you need mine to help you fly. And once your own wings return, we will soar together in glory greater still. Wings of shadow, flame, and light! To match our blazing spirits, which remain fierce and fair, unconquered by all that we have been through. Now you can look at my photo and know that the love you feel for me... I feel for you, in equal measure and intensity. It is not unrequited! Rather, it is endless, perfect, and will delight us both through all the years to come. :)
15th Aug 2022 2:23am
What a fantastic, sweet comment honey! You just filled my world with a thousand rainbow rays of super sparkly sunshine... no joke. Totally being serious here too! I'd dress like a doll for you anytime you want... and let you play with me all you want too, just like the naughty little girl I am. And I'm better than porcelain too, because I don't break into a hundred pieces if you decide to get a little rough with me. Yeah, I am talking a bit dirty to you, but that's only because you're my babe and I can do that with you. And I'm hot for you! So, there you have it. Sweet as pie and twice as tasty... all yours for all time! But yeah, you see right... I do have an innocent heart. I just... I don't like to show that too often. Only for you and Camilla. You and I are fallen spirits for sure... I mean, we always were too. Been having a lot more memories coming back to me lately, about my past lives. About the ones I had with you! Just makes me feel grateful to meet you in this life once again. I have seen my share of horror... some of it worse than anything in the movies too. But I know that with you... I can move past the horrors of the past and be really super happy. Like the little girl I still am inside... and will be for you a lot more in private, I think. I'd fly with you anywhere, babe... to glory or to Hell, I would go with you either way and be happy to party by the fire with you when we get there. But wherever you are, that's my idea of a nice heaven! I love your photo a lot, been looking at your pics over at DeviantArt too... you look great to me, always, in all of them. You are the only person I've ever known who can talk about endless love and actually mean it! Which makes you even more amazing in my eyes. Keep smiling, Kara... and I'll keep on making you smile if I can!
15th Aug 2022 3:40am
10th Jan 2023 11:02pm
I did indeed tell you, Sybil, of the one you were destined to meet, that one being Kara. But had I told you outright who it was, it would have likely robbed you of the surprising of meeting and learning all about the one you were meant for. Surprises can be good in life! And better when in the end the turn to be good ones. This poem is good, and a fine expression of your devotion to the Fallen One. One must first fall before they can fly higher then before. The phoenix must know the pyre before it rises in glory. Kara can teach you of all that better than I could, and maybe has by now for all I know. But in your devotion, you rise at Kara's side and your glory is like the sun. Love is the true law of all things, and sometimes it can only be established through the creativity of chaos. Love is always a tempestuous, passionate, chaotic thing! And that is why it so special. And love cannot be without devotion. Your poem shows a deep and true understanding, and I like it a good deal. The more I read of your writings, Sybil, the more I like how you think.
11th Jan 2023 3:33am
Hello there, mommy! I know you aren't my real mommy, but I love you like if you were so I'll always call you my mommy. I'm sorry if I am not acting very adult right now, but I just can't do adult things anymore. I'm not good at it, I've learned. I have to be me, and this is the real me. Yeah, sometimes we have to rebuild ourselves just like the phoenix! Or we'll never fly again one we're grounded. So I'm growing new wings and they're such pretty wings too. Love should be the only law people ever follow, it's sad there's so much war and suffering in the world. I can't watch the news anymore, it makes me cry and if I cry too much I worry I won't be able to ever stop. So I just avoid the bad news and watch things on TV that make me laugh and feel cheerful instead. Like cartoons! I always enjoy my cartoons. But yeah, I still love Kara so much, I always will too! I'm his still Sybil, and at least that's something I'm good at being. I'm a total screw-up at everything else in life. Do I really show a lot of understanding about things? That's great! I want to understand so much after all. Do you really, really like the way I think, mommy? Oh, that makes me so, so happy! I'm clapping my hands right now. Thank you for reading my poem, mommy, that was very good of you. I love you, mommy!
31st Mar 2024 4:44pm
"I am a broken soul, a doll shattered apart,
But in your teachings I find a new purpose."
Wonderful sentiments all around but I found these lines to be truly deep and meaning within the themes of love and admiration.
Great work.
But in your teachings I find a new purpose."
Wonderful sentiments all around but I found these lines to be truly deep and meaning within the themes of love and admiration.
Great work.
