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What if I reach
into your dreams
and pull out
a handful of stars
for those moons in your eyes
and a wisp of a kiss
on your lips
as my hair sketches
a careless silhouette
for those dreamy nights...
into your dreams
and pull out
a handful of stars
for those moons in your eyes
and a wisp of a kiss
on your lips
as my hair sketches
a careless silhouette
for those dreamy nights...
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
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22nd Jul 2022 10:19pm
I loved your review... Thank you so much, dear poet.,. That's very kind of you 😊🌹
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22nd Jul 2022 10:31pm
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22nd Jul 2022 11:04pm
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Hey, thank you so much, dear poet for stopping by and leaving a thoughtful n wonderful review. Very much appreciate that 😊🌹🥀
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22nd Jul 2022 11:27pm
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23rd Jul 2022 12:49pm
Haha... Glad you would like that 😁
Thanks a lot, dear PS😊 So happy to see this piece making it to your reading list 😊🌹🥀
Thanks a lot, dear PS😊 So happy to see this piece making it to your reading list 😊🌹🥀
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23rd Jul 2022 1:13am
Words so much more than just about the signs that we are both human and spiritual SOULS of consciousness thoughts of sensual pleasure awoken from the chambers of thoughts ✍👊🙏💪🦋🤗
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23rd Jul 2022 12:51pm
Hi Stoney, just feel so delighted to see you gracing my page with your beautiful comments again. 😊🥀 It's been a very long time... How have you been, dear poet?
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23rd Jul 2022 9:38pm
I'm doing good with my cancer treatments which is a very beautiful blessing 👊🙏🤗💖
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24th Jul 2022 5:56pm
I'll keep you in my thoughts n prayers, dear Stoney... Hope you get well soon 💕
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24th Jul 2022 11:19pm
Me too with the cancer treatments I am feeling much better now due to the treatments I have been able to see the process of learning how much this disease has affected my life but I am not going to give up 👊💪🙏🤗
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24th Jul 2022 11:26pm
I know you are a strong n courageous man, Stoney .You are a fighter...a warrior 😊and you will knock the hell outta cancer 👊😊
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25th Jul 2022 1:10pm
FOSHO dear poetess for I have a great support system in my wife and daughter and the upmost love of my friendships that has gave me the encouragement and empowerment to keep on pushing through the process of cancer treatment 👊🙏💪🤗
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23rd Jul 2022 3:11am
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23rd Jul 2022 12:52pm
Thanks a lot, dear poet for your kind feedback. Very much appreciate you stopping by 😊🌹
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23rd Jul 2022 7:20am
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23rd Jul 2022 12:55pm
Awww... Thanks a lot, dearest DC.. Such high opinion about my writings from someone of your calibre, it truly is an honour for me. Much thanks 😊🌹🥀
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23rd Jul 2022 6:35pm
Oh, those dreams are the kind to hope for.
Lovely poem for your special someone.
Lovely poem for your special someone.
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24th Jul 2022 2:23am
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25th Jul 2022 9:02am
Thank you so much for honouring me with your gracious words and the RL add 🌹Very much appreciate it, dear poet😊
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25th Jul 2022 1:35pm
Wow, the artwork is absolutely beautiful, like the words; it is an incredible pairing that really takes this to new heights which is just amazing. This delicate but super passionate delivery of a message of pure love is perfect in every way. You cannot help but feel it deeply, and that is definitely true poetry. The imagery is gorgeous.
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25th Jul 2022 11:07pm
I really love your thoughtful, insightful n beautiful comments... It's so flattering to have your presence on my page... Thanks a bunch, dear poetess for appreciating my art work and my poem🥀 Your kind words mean a lot to me ,dear Kristina... And I'm truly honoured to find my piece making it to your reading list 😊🌹Much thanks 🙏
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28th Jul 2022 7:40pm
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9th Sep 2022 9:35pm
Great visions of poetry here....I am trying to get better with my poems
I still have a long way to go....you inspire writers.
I still have a long way to go....you inspire writers.
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Wow! That's a big compliment for me, dear poet... But I, too, have a long way to go n I'm still working on my writing skills and I must say that I'm learning a lot through excellent work of some fantastic poets of dup. 😊
Thank you so much for stopping by n leaving kind comments. 🥀
Thank you so much for stopping by n leaving kind comments. 🥀
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10th Dec 2022 2:15pm
Your Art work goes well with your poetry. But The words are blinding. Like i said before, I am a fan of your work.
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10th Dec 2022 6:41pm
Oh, thank you so much, dear friend 🌹 it's so flattering to be highly praised by a poet of great calibre such as yourself. 😊 So glad you like my art work too. Much thanks 🙏
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15th Apr 2023 9:42am
Thanks a bunch for exploring my work 😊
I highly appreciate your kind thoughts on my work. 😊
I highly appreciate your kind thoughts on my work. 😊
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22nd Jun 2024 5:29pm
Love this piece for its evocative sense of longing and romance expressed through its imagery and lyrical language. Bravo!!
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