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Attention 2.0
I lay in bed for the phone to ring
and it does
that's the kind of love I got
I work for hours
and come home to hugs
that is the kind of relationship I got
and I guess someone like you plays pretend
let those men treat you like a superstar
giving you gifts and all their money
only for you to go on to the next one
they would steal for it
cheat for it
give up all their time for it
lie for it
probably die for it
and I don't even have a suit
maybe when I was younger
I would fall for foolish games
but now I'm the kind of guy
daddy warned you about
he knew I would fuck up that innocents
so be a good girl, and listen to daddy
because to me girls like you
are cheaper than a dollar store movie
a roll of tape, or pack of gum
I may have gave my heart to the first few
but you're like number 500 and fucking 1
you would kneel for it
pill for it
turn on a heal for it
lush for it
fuck for it
and I don't have a care to give
guess I shouldn't judge
but I find it all a bit pathetic
heart wrenching, and down right creepy
I'll never be the kind of man for games
just the kind of guy to tell it like it is
maybe too old for attention seeking
rather give time for the real thing
because that fake shit doesn't come close
and it does
that's the kind of love I got
I work for hours
and come home to hugs
that is the kind of relationship I got
and I guess someone like you plays pretend
let those men treat you like a superstar
giving you gifts and all their money
only for you to go on to the next one
they would steal for it
cheat for it
give up all their time for it
lie for it
probably die for it
and I don't even have a suit
maybe when I was younger
I would fall for foolish games
but now I'm the kind of guy
daddy warned you about
he knew I would fuck up that innocents
so be a good girl, and listen to daddy
because to me girls like you
are cheaper than a dollar store movie
a roll of tape, or pack of gum
I may have gave my heart to the first few
but you're like number 500 and fucking 1
you would kneel for it
pill for it
turn on a heal for it
lush for it
fuck for it
and I don't have a care to give
guess I shouldn't judge
but I find it all a bit pathetic
heart wrenching, and down right creepy
I'll never be the kind of man for games
just the kind of guy to tell it like it is
maybe too old for attention seeking
rather give time for the real thing
because that fake shit doesn't come close
Published 15th Jul 2022
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15th Jul 2022 8:38am
Fuck yeah!!
I love your tell-it-like-it-is righteous smack downs!! This was fire, DC!! You let it out and it was fierce and ferociously cool.
You say what you mean and you mean what you say!!
I deeply respect that!
Excellently poeted, friend.
🌹 - 💙
B
I love your tell-it-like-it-is righteous smack downs!! This was fire, DC!! You let it out and it was fierce and ferociously cool.
You say what you mean and you mean what you say!!
I deeply respect that!
Excellently poeted, friend.
🌹 - 💙
B
15th Jul 2022 10:08am
I always have been a person that has to say it like it is. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. It makes me happy when people understand how I feel.
Such a great comment 😁 I very much appreciate it, friend.
Such a great comment 😁 I very much appreciate it, friend.
