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If You Don't Mind
If You Don't Mind
An invitation
is not a threat;
at least,
if you're asking,
it's not a threat yet.
As long
as you're giving me
views of your breast,
you might
as well let it
accept all my best.
My hands
on your back
and my lips
on your nipple,
not to just tickle
or merely to tipple.
The roof
of the tree
has a touch
in its root,
and taking it in
isn't playing a flute.
Manhandling deeply,
orgasmic display,
minding the store
while rolling
in hay.
An invitation
is not a threat;
at least,
if you're asking,
it's not a threat yet.
As long
as you're giving me
views of your breast,
you might
as well let it
accept all my best.
My hands
on your back
and my lips
on your nipple,
not to just tickle
or merely to tipple.
The roof
of the tree
has a touch
in its root,
and taking it in
isn't playing a flute.
Manhandling deeply,
orgasmic display,
minding the store
while rolling
in hay.
Published 13th Jul 2022
Author's Note
The mouth is a very under rated sex organ when used with intention.
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I think that mouths are as important as any other, RT!
I like the slow savoring, the feel of lips and tongue searching, tasting....driving sensations to slowly peak and crest ... For me, that's how it all begins: a single nuanced taste, smell or feel. Those first heart pounding kisses be it mouth to mouth or flesh or clit.... It's those mammothly important kisses where I can usually determine a huge sense of compatibility.....Soooo exquisitely hot and a complete turn on, if willing and used well.
There goes my narratophilia... off on the slightest tangent.... hahaha... ;p
Loved this piece, RT
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I like the slow savoring, the feel of lips and tongue searching, tasting....driving sensations to slowly peak and crest ... For me, that's how it all begins: a single nuanced taste, smell or feel. Those first heart pounding kisses be it mouth to mouth or flesh or clit.... It's those mammothly important kisses where I can usually determine a huge sense of compatibility.....Soooo exquisitely hot and a complete turn on, if willing and used well.
There goes my narratophilia... off on the slightest tangent.... hahaha... ;p
Loved this piece, RT
🌹 - 💋
13th Jul 2022 6:18am
Tangents do touch on only one spot....
And that's why your stories are always so hot.
And that's why your stories are always so hot.
13th Jul 2022 6:56am
Yes -plenty of exploring to be done erotically with the mouth. Favourite verse, rhyme hits in the eye:
As long
as you're giving me
views of your breast,
you might
as well let it
accept all my best. [ie you let me see, may as well touch]
As long
as you're giving me
views of your breast,
you might
as well let it
accept all my best. [ie you let me see, may as well touch]
13th Jul 2022 8:18am
Exactly....Of you don't mind....could be seen as if you're not good, I will punish you.
But, I've been writing a series of pieces about straightforward and proactive communication....
This is not...if it's not a bother, but rather while you are being an exhibitionist, let's explore my rewarding you for your candidness.
Not just, I am aroused, let me get off....but rather your getting off as an exhibitionist could lead to affection, admiration, interpersonal expression.
None of my poems are about my sexual satisfaction directly. All of them are about my appreciating my cohorts for their expressing themselves. It's always appreciation and encouragement.
Now that that is out there, if you go back and reread my work, they are all about compersion. I enjoy others' feeling fulfilled and satisfied.
It's hiding in plain sight.
An under current is a sort of ennui about how often people pass up love and acceptance....better the demons they know than the angels they don't know.
Thanks for pointing that out.
But, I've been writing a series of pieces about straightforward and proactive communication....
This is not...if it's not a bother, but rather while you are being an exhibitionist, let's explore my rewarding you for your candidness.
Not just, I am aroused, let me get off....but rather your getting off as an exhibitionist could lead to affection, admiration, interpersonal expression.
None of my poems are about my sexual satisfaction directly. All of them are about my appreciating my cohorts for their expressing themselves. It's always appreciation and encouragement.
Now that that is out there, if you go back and reread my work, they are all about compersion. I enjoy others' feeling fulfilled and satisfied.
It's hiding in plain sight.
An under current is a sort of ennui about how often people pass up love and acceptance....better the demons they know than the angels they don't know.
Thanks for pointing that out.
