(...i am...)

Truly hard to read.... but I understand a purge needs a place to exist.... nicely vented.


(reminder of lots of hugs sent from across the pond and there's always loads of promise and potential ahead!)

🌹-💙
B

Painful, heartfelt, straight no bs
Love and light mate
Ron

HAGGIS! OMG! Brilliant.

The subject was gutting, but the structure was ah-may-zing.

There was the message within the poem that bled new despair...
a hole
less
death

Like the entirety of existence is simple empty without death.

And the end, the broken ellipsis. Ellipsis signify something is cut out, and to break the ... at the end was structurally genius.

Whatever you're going through, hold on. Just hold on.

This was really great.

thank you

for that interesting comment
all your thoughts

and finding a deeper meaning

my problem with writing is i dont think i just write

everything comes as published with little editing

so i am surprised when see things i havent even thought when writing

i will echo the comments above. it's a gut punch of a read, but so very clever. well done!

Lots of food for thought here.  I think we all feel like this at times!

you, are somebody

I like the depth there is to this while keep it brief.