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Release me
trace your fingers
over the shape
of my soul
and the curve
of my spine
gently stroke
the ache
in my body
feel me
feed me
give me more
and more
dive inside
write sweet poetry
against the warmth
of my walls
each letter
swirling and caressing
the depths
of my being
release me
and let me feel
your pulse
run throughout
my veins
over the shape
of my soul
and the curve
of my spine
gently stroke
the ache
in my body
feel me
feed me
give me more
and more
dive inside
write sweet poetry
against the warmth
of my walls
each letter
swirling and caressing
the depths
of my being
release me
and let me feel
your pulse
run throughout
my veins
Published 11th Jul 2022
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11th Jul 2022 00:35am
11th Jul 2022 00:37am
11th Jul 2022 1:13am
Dear JC,
Oooffff! Wow!!! Bam!!!!
Very hot stuff wrapped in an elegant presentation. There wasn’t a word in here that didn’t lend itself to a very sensual experience. Well done. H🌷
Oooffff! Wow!!! Bam!!!!
Very hot stuff wrapped in an elegant presentation. There wasn’t a word in here that didn’t lend itself to a very sensual experience. Well done. H🌷
11th Jul 2022 1:21am
11th Jul 2022 2:20am
Those legs.... the stockings....
And the words that follow. Holy Diver!
It's awesome how you blended the physical with the poetic. Because how often is that exactly what we try to do? Written well, at that.
Great stuff.
And the words that follow. Holy Diver!
It's awesome how you blended the physical with the poetic. Because how often is that exactly what we try to do? Written well, at that.
Great stuff.
11th Jul 2022 2:31am
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11th Jul 2022 2:47am
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11th Jul 2022 9:19am
once again...
your descriptiveness is wonderful.
" write sweet poetry
against the warmth
of my walls"
such imagery....thought provoking.
your descriptiveness is wonderful.
" write sweet poetry
against the warmth
of my walls"
such imagery....thought provoking.
11th Jul 2022 10:20am
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Anonymous
12th Jul 2022 00:28am
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12th Jul 2022 00:38am
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12th Jul 2022 1:34am
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12th Jul 2022 2:50am
This feels like a more descriptive version of the song, "With You I'm Born Again"!
12th Jul 2022 8:32pm
12th Jul 2022 2:23pm
Like a fountain pen tracing along the canvas, pulling out of it a poem when all the ink has spilled.
12th Jul 2022 8:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
23rd Jul 2022 12:44pm
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23rd Jul 2022 9:09pm
23rd Jul 2022 6:01pm
Favourite lines (for their literary eroticism):
write sweet poetry
against the warmth
of my walls [a welcoming of the rhythm of his moves]
write sweet poetry
against the warmth
of my walls [a welcoming of the rhythm of his moves]
23rd Jul 2022 9:10pm
