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Just another dying star in the dark of night
I feel like a bright star amongst a world filled with light.
I'm engulfed by the darkness and no one even noticed my light going out.
I'm engulfed by the darkness and no one even noticed my light going out.
Published 8th Jul 2022
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8th Jul 2022 2:39am
That can be terrible. But there is also a big difference between being alone and being lonely, as you know very well, I am sure.
10th Jul 2022 5:26am
Dear M,
Beautiful ability to express and define emotion. I really appreciated the metaphor of the star. Extremely effective as well as relatable. Another stellar write. H🌷
Beautiful ability to express and define emotion. I really appreciated the metaphor of the star. Extremely effective as well as relatable. Another stellar write. H🌷
10th Jul 2022 8:24am
