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That Makes Two
maybe I'm the darkness
probably the hurt
the one who gave less
when you were lost
I can see the resentment
the sweltering in your eyes
but where were you?
yeah, where the fuck were you!?
you never lifted a finger
was always the one siphoning me
like some kind of blood sucking leech
so let's stop these games
you never tried for anyone but yourself
maybe I'm the evil
lost my way along the road
should of gave time
but what a waste that would be
yeah, what a fucking waste!
had no problem lifting you up
we were buds until it turned sour
always played the victim
well if that's true then that makes two
thought it would be us fighting for one another
now you walk around like we're enemies
wishing for my failures
well guess that makes two
yeah bitch! that makes two
probably the hurt
the one who gave less
when you were lost
I can see the resentment
the sweltering in your eyes
but where were you?
yeah, where the fuck were you!?
you never lifted a finger
was always the one siphoning me
like some kind of blood sucking leech
so let's stop these games
you never tried for anyone but yourself
maybe I'm the evil
lost my way along the road
should of gave time
but what a waste that would be
yeah, what a fucking waste!
had no problem lifting you up
we were buds until it turned sour
always played the victim
well if that's true then that makes two
thought it would be us fighting for one another
now you walk around like we're enemies
wishing for my failures
well guess that makes two
yeah bitch! that makes two
Published 27th Jun 2022
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Hey DC,
Sometimes that deep pent up anger needs it's own healthy place where it can just fucking rage!!!
I loved the freedom of letting it all just rip; the no nonsense release. There's obviously such hurt. betrayal and the deep sense of being wronged that emanates so loudly; when it's by someone you thought you could trust, it only makes it that much more painful. I can relate and know how that must sting. I hope you felt a decent amount of catharsis by penning this well crafted purge, getting some of that ire out from causing havoc within.
Btw, I don't believe your evil for having such hurtful animosity, DC... only human.
It's not wrong to self protect.
Powerful and piercing righteousness.
Love it.
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
Sometimes that deep pent up anger needs it's own healthy place where it can just fucking rage!!!
I loved the freedom of letting it all just rip; the no nonsense release. There's obviously such hurt. betrayal and the deep sense of being wronged that emanates so loudly; when it's by someone you thought you could trust, it only makes it that much more painful. I can relate and know how that must sting. I hope you felt a decent amount of catharsis by penning this well crafted purge, getting some of that ire out from causing havoc within.
Btw, I don't believe your evil for having such hurtful animosity, DC... only human.
It's not wrong to self protect.
Powerful and piercing righteousness.
Love it.
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
I don't really get hurt, it's more irritating when someone expects so much from you but gives nothing back. I also don't really see myself as evil. More it's maybe they see me that way for not running to the rescue. And yea, we all must do what's is right for us and protect ourselves.
Thanks for the read, friend 😁 it is always nice to hear from you.
Thanks for the read, friend 😁 it is always nice to hear from you.
