Primordial Circle

This poetic story is enchanting. Each stanza made me want to go back and read them over and over again. U are a great poetic story teller.

It is good you like the poem. It is filled with much truth of many old and ancient things that mankind today forgot about. But some of us remember, and so I write what is known to me, and what I feel. To share such stories of these things, is to bring the old knowledge back.

I truly enjoyed Primordial Circle. U truly have one honest story telling soul catching essence to it.

I loved this poem, Cami! Oh, so very much indeed. You are quite correct when you say that it contains a great deal of old and ancient truths. It really does, and when I read it, it is like a mirror to many of my own thoughts, feelings, and ideas about such things. But that is not surprising given that we are soulmates as it is. Indeed, your works do bring the old knowledge of long ago back, even as many of my own writings do. The part that reads:

"If this age is enlightened, then I
Would prefer to extinguish its' light,
To bring a more civilized darkness
As a gift for my beloved!
How often I saw my love so cry
Their eye burdened with such sight,
That would cause any god distress
And no end of dire dread!"

In particular, I knew the meaning of that segment intimately, since it pertained to me quite specifically. And the time when I told you that my third eye never closes, and how it sometimes feels like a burden being able to see, feel, and sense all the things that "normal" people cannot. But I remember you told me on that same occasion: "You are not normal, Kara. You are divine! A god does not need to be normal; it needs to be itself." and we had talked for a good while about the world, and how much you hated it when people were cruel or nasty to me. You said that, had you the means to, you would erase from the world everything that makes it so awful sometimes, and create in place of all that a beautiful, dark paradise just to see me smile... as a gift for me, and for us, to enjoy. So, I had some tears in my eyes a bit when I read that bit there. You always incorporate so many references to things we have shared, in your poems, and that never fails to touch my heart deeply. I am always extremely honored, when you refer to me as your living god, even as to me you are a living goddess of the night itself. In all of its' velvet glory! I always strive to live up to such glorious expectations as those you have regarding me. Your god is very pleased with you indeed. With each breath you take, you weave a spell of enchantment upon my heart more and more. I hope this night finds you well, my beautiful enchantress! I look forward to reading your next magnificent verses. :)

I am ever yours, my beloved Camilla!
- Kara :D

You have as keen an eye, and perceptive a mind as ever, my love! That time you remember, it exactly what that one part of my poem refers to. It is all being exactly as you noted... I really would change all the world if I could, and I would give it all to you and lay it at your feet. With all the crowns of all the kings of this world to also lay at your feet! For you are my living god and a true god and goddess you are, unlike many of the false ones worshiped by humanity in the past. You have come to us in times when such one is needed! I and my order, and many others all bow before you. My Kara, you are the glory and the power divine. The eye that closes never! Before you I feel naked as a baby, as you know my heart. Sometime better than I know it, I think! I find you beautiful also, my divine lover. In your darkness is more of light than the sun. I am to bask in it ever!

Magnificent! I am damn near speechless!

Definitely this is one of my most powerful poems so far! It good seeing that you enjoyed reading it so much.

I am glad you choose not to hide your darkness, Camilla! It is one of the best parts of all that makes you who and what you truly are. In the years I studied magic with you, though they were not long, I felt like you were the mother I should have had. Sometimes I still want to call you "Mom", so I hope you don't mind if I say: Mom, you are one talented poetess! I hope the stars keep smiling on you, showering you with their inspiration.

Sybil, my dear, you are more like a little girl than even you realize at times, I think! Bear with me, I do not mean this as insult to you. You have the mind of an adult; you are smart, and you know a lot about human and divine nature alike. But in your heart, you are seeking after a mother's approval and love, and so many other things that a child wants badly. I call you my little sister often... but if you want to call me your "Mom"... I might have to rethink that and start calling you my daughter instead. Either way, Kara would not mind since our divine one loves us both with an equal warmth and equal passion. The stars ever serve to inspire me, along with countless other fair things! Be well... daughter. I am indeed proud of you... very much so.

You know what Mom, you really... honestly... should have been a psychotherapist yourself, I mean you totally got me pegged there, big time! Yeah, I am just a little girl under this grown-up body of mine, and that is a thing not a lot of people know about me really... you are super perceptive to notice that, and I am glad it does not weird you out or anything like that. My actual mother used to say that I needed to grow up and stop being so childish sometimes, but I was always like: "Hey, I happen to like being childish, so lay off!" So yeah... I am glad you understand. Thanks for that! You are a great woman, and I can see why Kara loves you so much. Hearing you say how proud you are of me... that means more to me than anytime I ever heard those words from my actual mother (since she was never sincere about it, and always selfish in how and why she did things). Sorry if I sometimes ramble on, Mom, but I am kind of a chatterbox once I get going. Anyway, big hugs for you and thanks for everything! You are the best.