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Busted
I blushed, a busted flush, when I was caught,
Dreaming of hidden bits I could not glimpse.
I checked him out for longer than I ought
To have done: adoring his bulgy hints:
He almost seemed to swell beneath the cloth:
His contained manhood, sensual in the strength
Of feeling he evoked in me, soon cost
All sense of distance: hence the heady length
Of time, I spent observing, grew. How rich
I would have been had he filled me with flesh.
I bit my lip to calm each inner itch;
Seeing his smiling eyes. our gazes meshed!
Such stories could be told: the blushing watch
Of goodies, thus, observed round a man's crotch.
Dreaming of hidden bits I could not glimpse.
I checked him out for longer than I ought
To have done: adoring his bulgy hints:
He almost seemed to swell beneath the cloth:
His contained manhood, sensual in the strength
Of feeling he evoked in me, soon cost
All sense of distance: hence the heady length
Of time, I spent observing, grew. How rich
I would have been had he filled me with flesh.
I bit my lip to calm each inner itch;
Seeing his smiling eyes. our gazes meshed!
Such stories could be told: the blushing watch
Of goodies, thus, observed round a man's crotch.
Author's Note
I need to concentrate on coffee as a barrista and not on other matters. And it would be nice if everyone concentrated on developing their own poetic skills and not acquiring others endeavours by stealth
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Re. Busted
21st Jun 2022 10:44am
LOL, how awesome is this poem?
In my youth, I occasionally noticed the lovelies looking to see which way I "dressed".
Ladies at their best, most assuredly!
In my youth, I occasionally noticed the lovelies looking to see which way I "dressed".
Ladies at their best, most assuredly!
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Re: Re. Busted
21st Jun 2022 11:51pm
Re. Busted
21st Jun 2022 11:38am
Awesome just Awesome you naughty girl peeking where you shouldn't lol
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Busted
21st Jun 2022 11:59pm
Re. Busted
21st Jun 2022 12:45pm
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22nd Jun 2022 00:06am
Re. Busted
21st Jun 2022 5:28pm
the view sounds like the equivalent of camel toe for women
how about "boxer bulge" ? for men
The longer you look, the longer it seems
how about "boxer bulge" ? for men
The longer you look, the longer it seems
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Re. Busted
Re. Busted
3rd Jul 2022 3:57pm
Re. Busted
17th Jul 2022 2:07pm
A stick to stir
the inner brew
deep within her
the frothing grew
Hey you, what an awesome rhyme scheme, maintained well throughout your mischievous adult scene. It's awesome!
the inner brew
deep within her
the frothing grew
Hey you, what an awesome rhyme scheme, maintained well throughout your mischievous adult scene. It's awesome!
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Re: Re. Busted
18th Jul 2022 12:51pm
Re. Busted
18th Dec 2022 3:15am
Oh honey darling, this sparked my manhood like a match to a candle. You really know how to take charge of a man and make him do as you will.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. Busted
19th Jan 2023 7:08pm