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Cocktails
It is always intriguing to follow
Sir's eyes, while averting my own:
This old man who tells me to swallow
My boyfriend's young cock, so boy bone
Is pressed in my throat and outlined
For the pleasure of an aged viewer,
Who leans over us. He's inclined
To pull down jean pants and, then, skewer
Adonis arse. Master's cock
Is thick and quite rigid: my boy
Is no longer laid back: the shock
On anal star's acute. You toy
With us both, Sir; your enjoyment
Is something to make us regress
As strange creatures needing deployment
Of cock into crevice. Excess
Is never enough for a something:
And we are two somethings for Sir;
We're used to this unsubtle drilling.
He chooses just how we concur.
Control Is exerted once taken
And we both accept a good seeding;
Our bodies are stirred and, then, shaken -
Knowing each cocktail's intriguing.
Sir's eyes, while averting my own:
This old man who tells me to swallow
My boyfriend's young cock, so boy bone
Is pressed in my throat and outlined
For the pleasure of an aged viewer,
Who leans over us. He's inclined
To pull down jean pants and, then, skewer
Adonis arse. Master's cock
Is thick and quite rigid: my boy
Is no longer laid back: the shock
On anal star's acute. You toy
With us both, Sir; your enjoyment
Is something to make us regress
As strange creatures needing deployment
Of cock into crevice. Excess
Is never enough for a something:
And we are two somethings for Sir;
We're used to this unsubtle drilling.
He chooses just how we concur.
Control Is exerted once taken
And we both accept a good seeding;
Our bodies are stirred and, then, shaken -
Knowing each cocktail's intriguing.
Author's Note
Watching an older guy staring at us in a juice bar, wondering how far he would go and what my boy would take - which reminds me - please don't take these words away and use them elsewhere, no matter what kind of poetic grifter you are.
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18th Jun 2022 00:02am
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18th Jun 2022 1:24pm
The juxtaposition of the vibrancy of youth and the inquisitiveness of the older man works well.
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18th Jun 2022 4:46pm
love needs to fill vast,
hateful caverns of morbid
fear. A mixture helps.
hateful caverns of morbid
fear. A mixture helps.
Re. Cocktails
20th Jun 2022 10:39am
From your comment on my poems, and calling me "sir", I hope some of the inspiration for your excellent eroticism is inspired by me; the old man watching.
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21st Jun 2022 1:55pm
I love the quick answer back
Now it's time I had a snack
whatever sense that makes in this nonsense world
By the way, I really like that. did you borrow it or is it yours?
Now it's time I had a snack
whatever sense that makes in this nonsense world
By the way, I really like that. did you borrow it or is it yours?
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19th Jan 2023 10:59pm
You would not want to
get involved with a wrong one
now would you, mister?
get involved with a wrong one
now would you, mister?
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20th Jan 2023 12:24pm
hope is a thing of
feather beds or something of
that sort of thing - smiles
feather beds or something of
that sort of thing - smiles
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18th Dec 2022 3:12am
Love this. I am not of a bisexual bent but can appreciate well-written poetry of this type. My favorite sci-fi writer is gay and infuses his novels with this. I love his work as I do yours, my love.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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