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Paramount
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Love is the only reality and it is not a mere sentiment. It is the ultimate truth that lies at the heart of creation.
Rabindranath Tagore
Rabindranath Tagore
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Re. Paramount
8th Jun 2022 6:28am
Sexy and seductive. Last verse gives it a unifying climax to dwell over:
'When the sperm kisses the egg
you will find me in that single
moment of time'
'When the sperm kisses the egg
you will find me in that single
moment of time'
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Re: Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 00:39am
Thank you, my wise poet for taking the time to recognize such great stanzas, and as always, you tend to outline the best parts of my musing
Good morning in the UK and please enjoy your Thursday and make it count in all you do and in all you say
Good morning in the UK and please enjoy your Thursday and make it count in all you do and in all you say
Re. Paramount
8th Jun 2022 11:30am
Re: Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 00:47am
I can accept that beautiful accolade, my tender poet from you… Some people are known in this realm we call life to give the mind such sweet inspiration, whereas you can feel the emotions of that person’s impression to bring that mental illusion into word play.
In as much, thank you for taking the time to read and then inscribing a very awesome comment.
I do hope you have enjoyed your Hump Day as you prepare you mind, body, and give credence to the spirit for the renewal of Thursday.🎁
In as much, thank you for taking the time to read and then inscribing a very awesome comment.
I do hope you have enjoyed your Hump Day as you prepare you mind, body, and give credence to the spirit for the renewal of Thursday.🎁
Re. Paramount
8th Jun 2022 2:44pm
Re: Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 00:53am
Well, isn’t this a pleasant surprise, my poet, gracing my canvas with poetic admiration, which I can bow to with the utter most respect, I sincerely thank you.
In addition, that merit extends for reading as well.
I am bidding you a relaxing Wednesday evening a blessed Thursday with universal rewards to appreciate and enough always to share.
In addition, that merit extends for reading as well.
I am bidding you a relaxing Wednesday evening a blessed Thursday with universal rewards to appreciate and enough always to share.
Re: Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 7:20am
Thank you my dear poetess, the pleasure is all mine. All too often I use this site as a vehicle for venting, failing to reciprocate, likewise the time and courtesy which has been given to me. You have graced me with your kind words and warm regards. As a honeycomb, sweet to the soul and health to the bones. You my dear are the essence of elegance that puts poetry in motion. I'm much appreciative. Thank you again. Godspeed.
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Re. Paramount
8th Jun 2022 5:39pm
Re: Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 1:02am
You do me moderate justice, my poetess with a comment of praise, thank you; it is always an honor to know that my musing can touch someone' heart, and as well as their mind.
Subsequently, thank you for reading.
I am wishing you nothing, but blue skies and twinkling stars above this evening and as tomorrow manifest its presence, may the Creator’s' blessing shine upon you in all you do and in all you say.
Subsequently, thank you for reading.
I am wishing you nothing, but blue skies and twinkling stars above this evening and as tomorrow manifest its presence, may the Creator’s' blessing shine upon you in all you do and in all you say.
Re. Paramount
8th Jun 2022 7:37pm
Re: Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 1:05am
Ahh.. my friend, you make me feel my ponders are well received, each time you write upon my canvas, a heartfelt accolade and thank you for letting me know that time after time.
The day is winding down, therefore, continue to enjoy your Wednesday and have a uplifting Thursday in the making.
The day is winding down, therefore, continue to enjoy your Wednesday and have a uplifting Thursday in the making.
Re: Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 2:06pm
Re. Paramount
9th Jun 2022 8:04pm
When the sperm and egg meet it creates a beautiful miracle. Keep on writing my Queen. You will always be my muse.
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