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Lingerie
and I’m laying on the edge of the bed
admiring the way my high heels
look on your shoulders,
arching like a cat in heat,
rubbing my clit with one hand
and twisting one nipple with the other.
my long body is goddamn art
in this lingerie,
and I know it.
and you know it.
the only thing that
looks better on me
than lace
is you.
admiring the way my high heels
look on your shoulders,
arching like a cat in heat,
rubbing my clit with one hand
and twisting one nipple with the other.
my long body is goddamn art
in this lingerie,
and I know it.
and you know it.
the only thing that
looks better on me
than lace
is you.
Published 6th Jun 2022
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6th Jun 2022 3:57am
6th Jun 2022 3:58am
6th Jun 2022 4:35am
hello Betty good evening you do paint a picture with enticing words
I can see the scene playing out from here...sexy write...
I can see the scene playing out from here...sexy write...
6th Jun 2022 12:23pm
6th Jun 2022 4:37am
6th Jun 2022 12:23pm
6th Jun 2022 6:34am
A man would be flattered to be told:
the only thing that
looks better on me
than lace
is you.[in nothing else, I would add]
the only thing that
looks better on me
than lace
is you.[in nothing else, I would add]
6th Jun 2022 12:24pm
“my long body is goddamn art
in this lingerie,
and I know it.
and you know it.”
The italics didn’t seem to copy across, but there’s something cheeky in that, that I find interesting,
It’s like you’re inviting the reader to be the “you” in the piece, a neat little trick I might add, highlights in such a short write how something as simple as format can push your writing into a different place.
I might suggest hyphening high-heels, but ignore me, I’m trying to pretend I’m here to admire the writing rather than being a voyeur of something base 😅
in this lingerie,
and I know it.
and you know it.”
The italics didn’t seem to copy across, but there’s something cheeky in that, that I find interesting,
It’s like you’re inviting the reader to be the “you” in the piece, a neat little trick I might add, highlights in such a short write how something as simple as format can push your writing into a different place.
I might suggest hyphening high-heels, but ignore me, I’m trying to pretend I’m here to admire the writing rather than being a voyeur of something base 😅
6th Jun 2022 12:28pm
"I might suggest hyphening high-heels, but ignore me, I’m trying to pretend I’m here to admire the writing rather than being a voyeur of something base"
Always got to come in this dive looking classy. NO! Look at the base shit! LOOK AT IT!
I had to refresh and go look it up, because hyphenating adjectives is a bitch: high-heel shoes have high heels. So fuck you for making me grammar first thing in the morning.
Always got to come in this dive looking classy. NO! Look at the base shit! LOOK AT IT!
I had to refresh and go look it up, because hyphenating adjectives is a bitch: high-heel shoes have high heels. So fuck you for making me grammar first thing in the morning.
