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He Can See It….
There once was a big black bird
But there really wasn’t
With eyes that no longer see
He can see it….
He said, “By the time it gets here it will be white.”
I wanted to see that big black bird
But it wasn’t there
He can see it….
But there really wasn’t
With eyes that no longer see
He can see it….
He said, “By the time it gets here it will be white.”
I wanted to see that big black bird
But it wasn’t there
He can see it….
Published 4th Jun 2022
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5th Jun 2022 7:20am
Dear TL,
Heart wrenching and stunning write. This so aptly defines seeing a loved one who is readying for another journey. You’ve written such a lovely poem for a very difficult subject. H🌷
Heart wrenching and stunning write. This so aptly defines seeing a loved one who is readying for another journey. You’ve written such a lovely poem for a very difficult subject. H🌷
25th Sep 2022 00:43am
An ominous write that leaves us reader intrigued and yet scared.
Well penned.
Well penned.
