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Re. Whispering Peat
3rd Jun 2022 8:52pm
How original... to see that in the mirror... this has a mythical quality about it... well done nikki...
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Re: Re. Whispering Peat
3rd Jun 2022 11:17pm
Re. Whispering Peat
4th Jun 2022 00:19am
Dear N,
Where is this mirror and where is this bog?! I wouldn’t care about getting older if it didn’t hurt so damn much. I must echo LDF because it really does have a mythical quality. It beckons us all. Awesome write. H🌷
Where is this mirror and where is this bog?! I wouldn’t care about getting older if it didn’t hurt so damn much. I must echo LDF because it really does have a mythical quality. It beckons us all. Awesome write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Whispering Peat
4th Jun 2022 00:35am
I bought a old photo album lot at a garage sale. This photo was inside, her nickname is Butch, I know because her name is all over these albums. She was with me when this was written she was in my head, felt like like anyways. The mythical feeling probably comes from that. I edited the picture to put my artsy spin on it. I think Butch approves.
Re: Re. Whispering Peat
4th Jun 2022 1:33am
Re. Whispering Peat
4th Jun 2022 9:33am
I have heard of mud baths but peat.?. :)
This is deeper than a thousand-thousand bogs Nikki...
Really captures the magical looking glass feel so brilliantly...
This is deeper than a thousand-thousand bogs Nikki...
Really captures the magical looking glass feel so brilliantly...
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Re: Re. Whispering Peat
4th Jun 2022 2:06pm
Thank you. Whatever dies in a raised bog you could pull out in 50 years and it would look the same.
Re. Whispering Peat
5th Jun 2022 00:33am
Re. Whispering Peat
5th Jun 2022 4:17am
Re. Whispering Peat
13th Jul 2022 1:13am
I liked the psychological and emotional to this. You weave words that leaves us thinking.
Well done.
Well done.
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