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Wild Black Rose2
(in perpetuity)
if I were panthera-kind
ide give you my eyes
searching the world
so in the emptiness
roses you may find
if I were a forest wolf
ide howl to you my words
igniting the fire
to warm you
through winter times
if I were a mountain goat
climbing cliffs to castles
ide raise my horns to verymeet
stormclouds
to bear your merryname
if I were a Boa
constricting all around you
ide whisper eternal verse
coiling them again and again and again
Maiden, Maiden
comb down your hair
so I can take a wild black rose
to hideaway in there
Maiden, Maiden
your eyes are fullmoons
pulling the tides of worlds in
magnet my heart toward you
if I were panthera-kind
ide give you my eyes
searching the world
so in the emptiness
roses you may find
if I were a forest wolf
ide howl to you my words
igniting the fire
to warm you
through winter times
if I were a mountain goat
climbing cliffs to castles
ide raise my horns to verymeet
stormclouds
to bear your merryname
if I were a Boa
constricting all around you
ide whisper eternal verse
coiling them again and again and again
Maiden, Maiden
comb down your hair
so I can take a wild black rose
to hideaway in there
Maiden, Maiden
your eyes are fullmoons
pulling the tides of worlds in
magnet my heart toward you
Published 3rd Jun 2022
Author's Note
I write this perpetual verse by inspiration from 2 dup ladyfriends who appreciated this theme
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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4th Jun 2022 10:28am
I was so captivated by your response lastnight,
as I wasn’t sure how it would measure up to WBR1
that I accidentally broke a shot glass fumbling trying to pour another brandy
– however, notwithstanding that little episode,
I am now committed to pumping out WBR3,
in perpetuity
and much greatfulness
-CIU
as I wasn’t sure how it would measure up to WBR1
that I accidentally broke a shot glass fumbling trying to pour another brandy
– however, notwithstanding that little episode,
I am now committed to pumping out WBR3,
in perpetuity
and much greatfulness
-CIU
4th Jun 2022 9:03pm
Hey CIU,
Ha! This is freaking awesome. You are cranking out some really great poetry but this
perpetuity beauty is one of my favs. You definitely have your own voice and style on the onset!
Also love the closing!!!
In my mind you are sitting on your gothic throne at midnight writing away
with a raven wing you use as your quill.
Just such classic goth style!!! Can't wait to read the next one.
Oh!!! and I almost forgot - you are also drinking
from a metal goblet full of brandy. No breaking shot glasses. heheheh
Great write amigo!!
Ha! This is freaking awesome. You are cranking out some really great poetry but this
perpetuity beauty is one of my favs. You definitely have your own voice and style on the onset!
Also love the closing!!!
In my mind you are sitting on your gothic throne at midnight writing away
with a raven wing you use as your quill.
Just such classic goth style!!! Can't wait to read the next one.
Oh!!! and I almost forgot - you are also drinking
from a metal goblet full of brandy. No breaking shot glasses. heheheh
Great write amigo!!
5th Jun 2022 00:48am
My dear Adelphina,
you are the main one that sparked this idea in me, that has set me off on this lifelong journey,
so I have you to kiss and thank
– and there is room for 3 on this throne,
so I extend my hand to you and BluV to join me as my Queens of Darkness, seated and seeded together we shall rule the Gothic galaxy,
and build an empire so great and vast that not even the speed of light shall escape our intense gravitation………..(remind you of anything? :)
I so absorb your mindfulness and the moviepicture you have cast,
- totally revel in it
btw I don’t drink that often, nor that much, but when I do, sometimes its like this dimension opens up and I get this force of inspiration to dip those raven feathers and give them new life,
(and just for the record it wasn’t drunkenness that broke my shotglass, it was sheer joy, believe me, I have my 3legged cat as witness to that event,
and so relieved that you bequeathed to me a breakproof metal goblet- that is my trophy)
you are the main one that sparked this idea in me, that has set me off on this lifelong journey,
so I have you to kiss and thank
– and there is room for 3 on this throne,
so I extend my hand to you and BluV to join me as my Queens of Darkness, seated and seeded together we shall rule the Gothic galaxy,
and build an empire so great and vast that not even the speed of light shall escape our intense gravitation………..(remind you of anything? :)
I so absorb your mindfulness and the moviepicture you have cast,
- totally revel in it
btw I don’t drink that often, nor that much, but when I do, sometimes its like this dimension opens up and I get this force of inspiration to dip those raven feathers and give them new life,
(and just for the record it wasn’t drunkenness that broke my shotglass, it was sheer joy, believe me, I have my 3legged cat as witness to that event,
and so relieved that you bequeathed to me a breakproof metal goblet- that is my trophy)
