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Coming to terms with the compass
I believe everything happens for a reason
but I was struggling with this one
Death and I had danced many times
since I was a child
and the juke joint
that she preferred
was open 24/7
and she loves to dance...
No
I think this road
was to walk in the shoes of another
to relate to all of those
that had a disease
that could kill them
This was a road they call empathy
but I was struggling with this one
Death and I had danced many times
since I was a child
and the juke joint
that she preferred
was open 24/7
and she loves to dance...
No
I think this road
was to walk in the shoes of another
to relate to all of those
that had a disease
that could kill them
This was a road they call empathy
Published 27th May 2022
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27th May 2022 11:04pm
The visual of dancing with death echoed with the activities of youth is both striking and effective as a passage of time in your poem. I enjoyed this little piece of introspection.
Thank you for sharing this part of your journey.
-M
Thank you for sharing this part of your journey.
-M
28th May 2022 7:09pm
28th May 2022 1:55am
Death is always breathing down my neck due to the way I chose to live my life, Ive never had cancer. But my husband did. I feel this on many levels. I wish you well. <3
28th May 2022 7:10pm
Thank you..I am Carcer free at this time, this is going to be a book of my story to try and help people with cancer cope
Anonymous
5th Jan 2023 8:46pm
Hi SS,
Hope all is well?
Such palpable emotional vulnerability.
A touching piece.
Take care.
X
Hope all is well?
Such palpable emotional vulnerability.
A touching piece.
Take care.
X
27th Mar 2023 4:49pm
