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Watching her suffer, a love story ....
She's suffering
Her mind always in conflict
I watch
Wait
Decide when to reward her
Then wait some more
Sometimes days
Learned her patterns
Reward her too fast and she won't be happy
Wait
Let her squirm
She loves it
Even though she says no
Trust instincts
She does
Love it
Wait
Her mind always in conflict
I watch
Wait
Decide when to reward her
Then wait some more
Sometimes days
Learned her patterns
Reward her too fast and she won't be happy
Wait
Let her squirm
She loves it
Even though she says no
Trust instincts
She does
Love it
Wait
Published 27th May 2022
Author's Note
Wait
Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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27th May 2022 4:10pm
Love the art... there is such a beautiful darkness that draws you in completely. I feel this one deeply. "Her mind always in conflict" - I feel like that was definitely written for me. To understand someone so intensely that you know the tells and respond accordingly. You nurture the darkest desires giving flowers completely devoid of color, those colors painted on the body and in the mind with emotion, need, and desire. Of course "She does Love it".... but wait...
I have Sadistic tendencies at times.
I try to channel it to the positive but it could be misinterpreted to the lay person.
Thanks on the painting, the X44C helped on that one.
If you felt this was poem was about you, then I succeeded.
When people read a poet and see themselves, it's a wonderful compliment...
Wait
There's more ....
I try to channel it to the positive but it could be misinterpreted to the lay person.
Thanks on the painting, the X44C helped on that one.
If you felt this was poem was about you, then I succeeded.
When people read a poet and see themselves, it's a wonderful compliment...
Wait
There's more ....
27th May 2022 7:02pm
Like KX (and probably many others) I see myself in the "mind always in conflict". Don't know how to feel about the rest of it. I'll have to come back to it on a different day.
I dig the monochrome flowers.
❤️k
I dig the monochrome flowers.
❤️k
27th May 2022 7:10pm
I'm often in conflict with myself too.
I channel in all kinds of weird ways
Painting flowers is a bright spot though !
Thx k
❤❤
I channel in all kinds of weird ways
Painting flowers is a bright spot though !
Thx k
❤❤
27th May 2022 9:28pm
A provocative and nuanced poem... I liked very much the fullness of the imagery sustained by the rhythm.
27th May 2022 9:44pm
28th May 2022 2:01am
Always leave her wanting more. It heightens the pleasure. Keep on writing.
28th May 2022 2:54am
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1st Jun 2022 3:43am
1st Jun 2022 11:05pm
There’s something provocative about being the watcher or being watched in a healthy relationship that is 🙂
The learning process, the thoughts, the caring, maybe the secret admirer excitement… making it all last for as long as possible
The learning process, the thoughts, the caring, maybe the secret admirer excitement… making it all last for as long as possible
1st Jun 2022 11:29pm
Yes
Agree
A voyeur of sorts
My role is to administer a doctrine
Like the founding fathers
Except darker
No quarter in the Chamber
Keeping her mind safe and exquisite passion
Wait .....
Agree
A voyeur of sorts
My role is to administer a doctrine
Like the founding fathers
Except darker
No quarter in the Chamber
Keeping her mind safe and exquisite passion
Wait .....
3rd Jun 2022 3:26am
3rd Jun 2022 11:34am
7th Jul 2022 5:40pm
Oh the sufferings of anticipation, it's like the best thing.
Amazing write Poet.
BIG LIKE.
Amazing write Poet.
BIG LIKE.
7th Jul 2022 5:49pm
