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Tear out my heart
Knock out a confession with whips,
Gnaw my moans with bites,
Burn out the tattoo with a flint-and-nail
Mark on the neck like beads.
Eradicate the pain of the lips with a touch,
Wet the inside with poisons,
Lash out passion with kisses,
And send me to hell, or heaven... both
Suffer a spasm of temptation
Tear out my Heart beating,
Wait until the beast settles down,
So that the insides heal in Love ...
Gnaw my moans with bites,
Burn out the tattoo with a flint-and-nail
Mark on the neck like beads.
Eradicate the pain of the lips with a touch,
Wet the inside with poisons,
Lash out passion with kisses,
And send me to hell, or heaven... both
Suffer a spasm of temptation
Tear out my Heart beating,
Wait until the beast settles down,
So that the insides heal in Love ...
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Re. Tear out my heart
18th May 2022 9:57pm
Fantastic read, awesome write, pain and pleasure great combo
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
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19th May 2022 00:49am
I am so happy you liked it. I can always count on you to understand me Ron. ;) Pushing the outer limits of pleasure requires some pain. To truly feel everything!!! Thank you so much for the love and light. ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
18th May 2022 10:49pm
Killer last line
Nobody does it better
I dare them to try for there is only one KristinaX
Mistress of pleasure through pain
This is a significant love story that burns and leaves the heart smoldering....
BIG LIKE
Nobody does it better
I dare them to try for there is only one KristinaX
Mistress of pleasure through pain
This is a significant love story that burns and leaves the heart smoldering....
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 1:07am
There are definitely a few meanings to be found in this one.
The intensity of pleasure and pain takes many forms.
I am very grateful for your kind words, I am unworthy of such praise.
For me, a love story must burn pushing the limits. Perhaps it will leave behind only ashes as the passion consumes completely but I will bathe in the fire and be reborn. ⛓️🩸💜
The intensity of pleasure and pain takes many forms.
I am very grateful for your kind words, I am unworthy of such praise.
For me, a love story must burn pushing the limits. Perhaps it will leave behind only ashes as the passion consumes completely but I will bathe in the fire and be reborn. ⛓️🩸💜
Re: Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 2:13am
Your are worthy of such praise.
Nobody writes like you
Keep your lamps trimmed and burning 🔥
Nobody writes like you
Keep your lamps trimmed and burning 🔥
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Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 1:50am
Re: Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 3:01am
And the pain lies deep within the pleasure. <3 Thank you so much for visiting me and sharing your wisdom Tim. ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 2:11am
Re: Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 3:03am
Oh yes! I am always brutally honest in my sensuality. ;) The pleasure is all mine BC. Thank you so much visiting me. ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 2:34am
Re: Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 3:06am
And in heaven is where your heart belongs Francisco. If I can help you get there that makes me really happy. Thank you so much for the encouragement. :)⛓️🩸💜
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19th May 2022 3:08am
Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 1:10pm
Nicely done with a sense of exchange between the characters in your mind touching the process of learning the truth of life 🙏👊🦋
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 2:27pm
Oh, there are so many characters in my mind. Sometimes they fight, sometimes they have an orgy, sometimes they are high, ... and on and on. It's hard keeping track of them all but there is always something to be learned. :) ⛓️🩸💜
Re: Re. Tear out my heart
19th May 2022 10:56pm
Words so true that reflects the process of creating and maintaining a wonderful environment that could be so simple as an understanding with COMMITTMENT and communications and consistency yet it hides behind the scenes of the mind like shadows of the darkness of characters with peeking eyes 🤔👊💪
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Re. Tear out my heart
“To vanquish the beast, one must not be afraid to awaken it.” ― Erin Forbes, Fire & Ice: The Ember Sword
“Because inside me is a beast that snarls, and growls, and strains toward freedom.. and as hard as I try, I cannot kill it.”
― Veronica Roth, Insurgent
This poem is like breaking a wild mustang. At first the beast will try to intimidate; but once broken will become inseparable. On the other hand an amorous poet who likes pain and pleasure! LOL.
“Because inside me is a beast that snarls, and growls, and strains toward freedom.. and as hard as I try, I cannot kill it.”
― Veronica Roth, Insurgent
This poem is like breaking a wild mustang. At first the beast will try to intimidate; but once broken will become inseparable. On the other hand an amorous poet who likes pain and pleasure! LOL.
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
20th May 2022 2:19pm
The beast always awakes around me. ;) It must be vanquished again and again.
There is a beast in all of us. Be careful, I claw and I bite. ;)
Always wild, I will never break. :p That is so true, the beast comes in many forms and as you break you can definitely become inseparable. What could be more fun than an amorous poetess who LOVES... ;) ⛓️🩸💜
There is a beast in all of us. Be careful, I claw and I bite. ;)
Always wild, I will never break. :p That is so true, the beast comes in many forms and as you break you can definitely become inseparable. What could be more fun than an amorous poetess who LOVES... ;) ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
20th May 2022 00:49am
You belong in hell
I'd frigging join you
Two misfits
Think of the fun in my jail cell down there
Like my avatar
Wearing Stripes and enjoying a conjugal Visit
Devil's delight
Can't wait
I'd frigging join you
Two misfits
Think of the fun in my jail cell down there
Like my avatar
Wearing Stripes and enjoying a conjugal Visit
Devil's delight
Can't wait
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
20th May 2022 2:20pm
That's our secret.
Of course...
Normal is boring.
So much fun to be had in the torture chamber.
Conjugal visits are of the highest imperative. :)
I am the Devil's delight.
The beast loves me.
How did I get this 666 tattoo? ⛓️🩸💜
Of course...
Normal is boring.
So much fun to be had in the torture chamber.
Conjugal visits are of the highest imperative. :)
I am the Devil's delight.
The beast loves me.
How did I get this 666 tattoo? ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
20th May 2022 4:58am
Dear K,
Love is a love doesn't matter in which form it comes. With a kiss or whip, confession or filled with emotion. You are a bouquet of colourful love and awaited enjoyment.
Kisses,
KS
Love is a love doesn't matter in which form it comes. With a kiss or whip, confession or filled with emotion. You are a bouquet of colourful love and awaited enjoyment.
Kisses,
KS
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
20th May 2022 2:37pm
Ah yes, it comes in so many forms. I have dealt with so many manifestations of beast in so many forms. Passion and pain go hand in hand don't they? With such incredible intensity... And with some pain you truly feel and experience everything overwhelming the senses. A bouquet of colourful love, I love that visual, and definitely awaited enjoyment always. ;) X ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
21st May 2022 9:38am
Such a primal yet refined
energy in this piece...
Reached refinement in the channeling...
In the cognition...
The infusion of tenderness
is quite striking & tantalizing...
Really excellent work
energy in this piece...
Reached refinement in the channeling...
In the cognition...
The infusion of tenderness
is quite striking & tantalizing...
Really excellent work
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
21st May 2022 3:04pm
Hey there Cipher, I really appreciate that you took a moment to visit me and give me your thoughts. :) I love that characterization of primal yet refined. It is an interesting dichotomy to live. The primal aspects always demand attention, no matter how refined and the channel is filled with chaos. I love that you can feel the tenderness that it takes to tear out someone's heart with intense physical acts of pain and pleasure. ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
12th Jun 2022 8:38am
Wow! You are quite the well, unique, interesting and addictive read! I love what I am getting into here! I have to say, well for me anyway, I've never come across someone like your talent/skills. I look forward to delving more into your words and i disagree, you ARE a poet. Enjoyed
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12th Jun 2022 2:30pm
Unique, interesting, and addictive; hell yeah ;) I love that. If you are really brave you can listen to me too. :p "never come across someone like your talent/skills" Wow, you leave me speechless Michael. So unfair. :p What
an incredible comment and compliment. Not sure about all that but damn if it does not feel good to hear it anyway. Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts with me. ⛓️🩸💜
an incredible comment and compliment. Not sure about all that but damn if it does not feel good to hear it anyway. Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts with me. ⛓️🩸💜
Re. Tear out my heart
21st Jun 2022 5:20pm
Hello my soulmate. I should definitely meet you. I need to touch you. magnificent sentences... you invaded my body and my mind.
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
21st Jun 2022 9:05pm
Oh my dear hardcrazy... That's what I do, invade bodies and minds. ;) Magnificent sentences, I love that you think so. I am very touched by your comment. ⛓️🩸💜
Re: Re. Tear out my heart
22nd Jun 2022 8:53am
Yes, you live in this world, I know you are there. unlike everyone else, you are crazy and smart. As you said in your poem, I am your poor helpless slave, washed with your fire and lingering in your soul.
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Re. Tear out my heart
28th Jun 2022 1:52am
This encompasses the new 3 Rs, rough, raw, and rivetingly vivid.
Awesome work Kristina.
Awesome work Kristina.
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Re: Re. Tear out my heart
28th Jun 2022 1:07pm
The 3 Rs, I love it! Those certainly sound like me. :p It means so much to me when you think it is awesome! It's such a boost. X As always, I really appreciate you stopping in to read me and share words with me. ⛓️🩸💜