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Flower In The Snow
Such a wonderful thing
To behold
The little flower
Poking out
Of the snow!
So precious is
This little gem
I have to say
It easily has
Made my day!
To behold
The little flower
Poking out
Of the snow!
So precious is
This little gem
I have to say
It easily has
Made my day!
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Re. Flower In The Snow
Anonymous
14th May 2022 12:50pm
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14th May 2022 11:37pm
That's definitely true for me. Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem! I appreciate it!
Re. Flower In The Snow
14th May 2022 12:54pm
Crisp... distilled... inspiring... my kind of poetry... well penned Faith...
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15th May 2022 8:02pm
Re. Flower In The Snow
Anonymous
14th May 2022 1:56pm
Sometimes, that metaphor of life bursting through that which is cold and lifeless is the only message of reassurance that we need.
It feels hopeful. Thanks for sharing this.
-M
It feels hopeful. Thanks for sharing this.
-M
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15th May 2022 9:10pm
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14th May 2022 3:41pm
This is lovely my Faith.
That imagery is lovely and the brevity of the piece is sharp and magical.
Just lovely
Al
That imagery is lovely and the brevity of the piece is sharp and magical.
Just lovely
Al
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Re: Re. Flower In The Snow
15th May 2022 9:12pm
Thank you, Al! I always appreciate what you have to say. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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14th May 2022 4:17pm
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15th May 2022 9:13pm
Re. Flower In The Snow
Hi Faith
Love the title - a poem all by itself my friend.
But the accompanied poem just adds an extra layer of loveliness:)
Love the title - a poem all by itself my friend.
But the accompanied poem just adds an extra layer of loveliness:)
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15th May 2022 9:16pm
Hi, Adelphina! Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks! I appreciate them.
Faith
Faith
Re. Flower In The Snow
15th May 2022 9:18am
Dear F,
A flower poking out of the snow is precious. It makes me think of strength and resilience in times of adversity. Also, how two opposing things can be so pretty. I really enjoyed the subject of this poem and how you conveyed so much with such brevity. Beautiful write. H🌷
A flower poking out of the snow is precious. It makes me think of strength and resilience in times of adversity. Also, how two opposing things can be so pretty. I really enjoyed the subject of this poem and how you conveyed so much with such brevity. Beautiful write. H🌷
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18th May 2022 3:02pm
Dear H,
Thank you for your wonderful remarks! You made my heart smile!
It's always so good to hear from you.
Faith
Thank you for your wonderful remarks! You made my heart smile!
It's always so good to hear from you.
Faith
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15th May 2022 4:29pm
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18th May 2022 3:04pm
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19th May 2022 00:32am
Re. Flower In The Snow
18th May 2022 2:52pm
Hi Faith, this is so very beautiful. I loved beholding this precious gem. So calming... I feel like the flower in the snow just feeling the shock of the cold breeze on my skin. Becoming peacefully numb to everything else that exists taking the cold briskness inside.
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18th May 2022 3:06pm
Hi Kristina's!
It's so nice to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful response to my little poem. It means so much to me.
Faith
It's so nice to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful response to my little poem. It means so much to me.
Faith