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If Only
For the first time ,
I saw your picture
the planets did align
with you infront of me ,
you're beauty defined
it knocked me off my seat
yes , the first time
it was just recently .
You don't even
know it ,
I can see
but dare not show you ,
I am me
an unknown poet
you are too
and this might blow it .
If only I could
just hold you
off this world ,
watch it spin
beneath you and I
forget the things
that on the earth does tie ,
I'd wrap you in my wings
towards new worlds we'd fly ,
I hate this as it stinks
for me and no chance , we're sky high ,
If only I could kiss
if only I could touch ,
you're black and white bliss
that I crave so much .
I saw your picture
the planets did align
with you infront of me ,
you're beauty defined
it knocked me off my seat
yes , the first time
it was just recently .
You don't even
know it ,
I can see
but dare not show you ,
I am me
an unknown poet
you are too
and this might blow it .
If only I could
just hold you
off this world ,
watch it spin
beneath you and I
forget the things
that on the earth does tie ,
I'd wrap you in my wings
towards new worlds we'd fly ,
I hate this as it stinks
for me and no chance , we're sky high ,
If only I could kiss
if only I could touch ,
you're black and white bliss
that I crave so much .
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so beautiful
16th Mar 2012 3:14pm
re: so beautiful
16th Mar 2012 3:17pm
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16th Mar 2012 3:20pm
re: Wow
16th Mar 2012 3:47pm
great
Anonymous
16th Mar 2012 7:02pm
I was ready to fly...I hope she hears the call-and this, as your others-is beautifully written and incorporates your usual flare for rhythm.

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re: great
16th Mar 2012 7:36pm
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2012 8:03pm
In a moment like this-you could buzz by my window-drunk-riding an old broom, with a rabid cat on back-and I would jump on-and never look back-but hey, that's just me-lol

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16th Mar 2012 8:26pm
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16th Mar 2012 7:11pm
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16th Mar 2012 7:38pm
Mesmerized...
18th Mar 2012 7:06pm
Yes, loves this! wow its beautiful;) man keep doin ya thang, its so refreshing, 4real tho;)
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re: Mesmerized...
18th Mar 2012 7:20pm
Wow!!!
18th Mar 2012 7:10pm
this lady must be a true beauty to have caught your eye and inspired your heart..I agree lucky lady..this is a beautiful heart touching poem..peace Crim :)
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re: Wow!!!
18th Mar 2012 7:22pm
re: !!!!!!!!!!!
2nd Apr 2012 5:49am