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i dont know why
i dont know why i cut myself i just do
i dont know why i hate myself i just do
i dont know why i have suicidal thoughts i just do
i dont know why i do what i do i just do
i just dont know why
on second thought i do know its bcause of you
i dont know why i hate myself i just do
i dont know why i have suicidal thoughts i just do
i dont know why i do what i do i just do
i just dont know why
on second thought i do know its bcause of you
Published 31st Jan 2010
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1st Feb 2010 3:11am
6th Apr 2010 11:50pm
1st Feb 2010 8:44pm
This is nice.
I like it.
Real simple but deep. I felt the same at one point. =)
I like it.
Real simple but deep. I felt the same at one point. =)
11th Aug 2011 11:21pm
maybe it would work better if you took out most
of the "i dont know why"'s.
i know, it kills the repetition, but the picture
might become more crystal.
(just a thought)
of the "i dont know why"'s.
i know, it kills the repetition, but the picture
might become more crystal.
(just a thought)
