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Magical Palindrome
["Like a dead person
Seeing the dreams
Of the living"
or for me - vice versa
Like a living person
seeing the dreams
of the dead] – Adelphina
Phantom eyes
Emerge from the kosmos
Telling lies
In truths – Truths in lies
In
Standing stone
Rows
Of
Dust
Of
Stars
All seeing
Seeing all
All being
Being all
Stars
Imparting parts
&
Portions
Absorbed in potions
Of
Complimentary
Notions
Paradisaical – Paradoxical
Coaxial elemental
Where
One element
Alludes
To the next adjacent
Element
Reversing course
Dissolving stone
In a spell
Of
A
Magical palindrome
Published 5th May 2022
Author's Note
I am too sleepless to leave an AN at this time... :p
Based on exchange with Adelphina...
I was thinking about palindromes
in the realms of dreams...
And how everything is a dream...
How when you look into
something... Something looks into you
The underlying mechanics of all movement...
This is taking me places...
Yay Author's Notes... :)))
Based on exchange with Adelphina...
I was thinking about palindromes
in the realms of dreams...
And how everything is a dream...
How when you look into
something... Something looks into you
The underlying mechanics of all movement...
This is taking me places...
Yay Author's Notes... :)))
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6th May 2022 2:46am
HA!!
This is a work of art with such a great rhythm. Love the play of phrases and words
throughout the whole piece. When I wrote that comment I was thinking in the
sense of a writer and characters. I'm the only one living and my characters
are basically dead until I get optioned. LOL
They are these little ghost muses that keep pestering me to give them life.
I do my best - I would be nowhere without them:)
You are killing it with all these posts my friend!!
All great pieces. Wish I could comment on all of them
but then I would never write:)
This is a work of art with such a great rhythm. Love the play of phrases and words
throughout the whole piece. When I wrote that comment I was thinking in the
sense of a writer and characters. I'm the only one living and my characters
are basically dead until I get optioned. LOL
They are these little ghost muses that keep pestering me to give them life.
I do my best - I would be nowhere without them:)
You are killing it with all these posts my friend!!
All great pieces. Wish I could comment on all of them
but then I would never write:)
6th May 2022 7:38am
