Come, find me in this freedom

Purpose. Intention. Satisfaction.

Where do these triangulations meet?

Giving, receiving, indulging.

Desire, need, speculation.

Imprint, instant, intuition.

A trail flows forward ahead.

Forward and steaming ahead....

Your thoughts are so wonderfully felt and appreciated, RT

My deepest thanks for your ability in seeing me and my writing, like you do.
🌹 - 💙
B

a powerful incantation...almost Shakespearean-like soliloquy...well written B

Hey there, Lawrence :)

Your comments are truly kind and moving..This was an off the cuff writing that I was in no way sure about, so your comments have really made a huge impact on my confidence.... Much thanks and deep appreciation, my dear poet 🙏

🌹 - 💙
B

come  
like  
breath on lips  
slip inside  
awaken  
my soul  

bring  
your belief  
in love  
open my eyes  
to awe  
of your heart  

on rhe secrets
of your lips  
i have no name  
only the one  
you give me
within a kiss  

come  
bring magic  
cast that spell
was already  
lost in your vast  
sky blue eyes  

were i'm flying  
over mountains .
withot doubts
in the crystal air  
i can hear your  
guiding heartbeat  

i welcome  
your truth  
in middle of night  
when it becomes cold
you are my  
blanket of love  

Ohhh C..

You're always surprising!
This poem-ply is an absolute stunner! I'm humbled that my words might have inspired such a pleasure-filled read.... You leave me marveling!

Much love and deep thanks-🙏
🌹-💙
B

Ok gorgeous you seriously need to read this one. It needs that silver tonged magic you weave
Loved this tons
Love and light
Ron xx

Lol... I'll think about recording a spoken word but you're probably the only one who would want to hear that version... Hahaha... You're too too kind, Ron.

I'm terrifically glad you enjoyed reading.

Thank you, thank you!
🌹 - 💙
B

Sometimes we have to fee ourselves from ourselves. Wonderful poem, friend 😁

Hi, DC :)
It's great seeing you!

Accessing that sense of freedom is intoxicating, indeed!

Much obliged for your lovely kind words and your generous list add.... It means a lot.

🌹 - B

to find such a path
one winding and that would last
i truly would  grasp
in search of such freedom,
seeking in all your wisdom.

Hey there, M.
I truly gasped myself, seeing you upon my page! You're a sight for sore eyes.... I've missed you and hope you have been doing well - 💙


I deeply appreciate your lovely comments, which allow my mind to soar once again, within that thoughtfulness of divine freedom...

Please don't be a stranger,
🌹 - B

thank you for the well wishes.
i hope you are well.

Taking it day by day -💙
🌹 - B

Hi Blue,hope ur well?
Really like this pen of yours.
Great piece.
X

Hey there, Wired6!  
 
I'm well and hope you are, too!!  
 
Your visits equal smiles and a lovely spark of joy... Warm thanks for stopping by!!  
I'm delighted you enjoyed reading.  
 
Be well and be safe out there, dear friend  
🌹 - B

We always want a freedom to reach physically where we take our imagination. What a beautiful peace that is beyond the imagination in the realm of love, freedom, desire and dream. I love to read it again and again the comprehend spirit of it and then assimilate into it.
Love,
KS

Your visits and comments are a welcome to partake in, KS.  
 
Thanks for the supportive encouragements and the boost to my waning confidence. It's a wonderful feeling to know that you've enjoyed reading numerous times—I very much appreciate you my friend.  
 
In abundant kindness,  
🌹 - B

Do You have the Map?

Awww.... Don't I wish!! If only it were that easy, dear Tallen. Perhaps it's more a state of mind or maybe it's all random and it comes down to the luck of the draw, (in finding....)  

You're a lovely and welcomed sight... Thank you for reading and lending your thoughts... It's much appreciated and always a pleasure to see you ✨

🌹 - 💙
B

Hey there, R :)
Your lovely kind words wash over me with such amazing depth and purity. I adore where this little poem took you and bask in the lush beauty you so pleasantly bestow.

It's a true joy that you've found some worry treasure here, my dear!!
Thank you for sharing your insightful mindset with me, it always inspires and means the world!

Much love and spring floral wishes your way 🌺
🌹 - 💙

We let freedom ring together ❤,LOL.   I will be your freedom.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Thanks for being a great support, Francisco! I appreciate you.

🌹 - B

You write majestically.  Like you are confident and sure of your stature in poetic ability.  
I admire that strength within you.

Ironically, in one of your replies above, you said something about "full steam ahead" I think.  And, while looking at the picture you chose to headline this poem... by sheer imagery, there is a ship within a turbulent sea and clouds.  
Look again, you'll see it.  
Coincidence?

Hey there, Styx  
 
It's amazingly beautiful to me how subjective artwork can be.... It's one of the several reasons why I love it, so. To me, the painting I selected is a couple, embracing and searching the seas of their mutually found passionate desire... Yet, I CAN see that ship sailing, too.... Duality, at it's finest.. Lol  
 
Your kind words in regards to my spur of the moment poem, make me think that I am becoming a bit better at building my confidence and vision... It's hard to see that clearly from within, sometimes ... Thank you for seeing me, my friend.... It's enormously meaningful  
 
... and I'm wholeheartedly grateful.  
🌹 - 💙  
xo - B

I went back and looked at the picture, and wow, the couple is so obvious!  She's wearing jeans even.  
Way back in the police academy, they did these series of observational situations.  You would be amazed what people see that wasn't there.  And how the obvious can be overlooked too, etc etc.   It's actually awesome how different people's perception can be.  They say it has a great deal to do with our individual psyche.  How our minds perceive values and threats and such.  Pretty cool to me.  

As for your writing, ma'am, you should know by now your obvious worth within it and your comfort in diving right into it.  You, as well as so many others, are solid writers.  I wish I could read and comment more on what is all out here.  Time runs low, alas.  

Be well, and be a brave writer.  You earned the armor.

Thanks for the reminders of my hard fought for written wars.. I definitely have the battle scars to prove it... Haha....


You're a king among men, my friend  
🌹-💙
B

miss Blu, I step out and find you and follow your literary journeys
even on clouds between cliffs,
your words help me to discover places I have never seen,
this was quite an atmospheric piece

btw your new black rose melts the art of everything around it

-CIU

thank you so much for sharing your heart and mind's eye with me. I've been behind in replying plus I have been considered leaving DU but I seem drawn back in.... Maybe I have a bit of a codependency upon the therapeutic relief I feel from exercising my thoughts upon the page.... Uggh... it's a conundrum, currently but I wanted to leave my sincere apologies /appreciation for your time and insightfulness.

It's deeply meaningful and I'm so stoked to play a small part of your creative experiences and exploration.

Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
Blu

dear MissBlu, theres no need to apologise
– you have also put down your heart on paper, moreso than I ever can,
you’ve actually poured it like the beverages that you so artfully write about,
and we drink in your ink that you have so skilfully spilled over to us

-I sincerely ask you to stay

you are such a source of inspiration to everyone at DUP, leading the way for others to follow,
and have inputted greatly into the lives of so many writers

I have detected the withdrawal, and hope this is only momentary

Could I ask why you have considered such things?

-CIU

This really encompasses what most of us seek in all aspect of life, such love (both platonic and romantic), passion, dreams and many things in between.  It's very endearing to see writes that are so full warmth and motivation, it really inspires many of us read over and over again.

Bravo.

Well Walter, your insights and valued feedback really hit me hard this afternoon. I often feel so focused on other irl things or pressures that receiving a 'Bravo' and feeling like I've touched another with a different or endearing approach, has me utterly giddy.... There are certain wishes, dreams and hopes that one fantasizes about being whispered out into the world, making even the smallest ripple...thank you for letting me feel a little bit of how that fantasy might actually be...
What a gift - thank you.
All my warmest, W.
🌹 - B