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Bright star
Bright star
written November 22nd, 2021
A star is placed in the sky
when each of us is born .
It is all the things we can be,
the brightest version of us.
Life breaks and makes us
but somewhere up there
we are always brilliantly
complete-whole-enough-perfect.
My sky may seem dark and starless
but I know I am up there
(and so are you) shining
without anything diminishing us.
written November 22nd, 2021
A star is placed in the sky
when each of us is born .
It is all the things we can be,
the brightest version of us.
Life breaks and makes us
but somewhere up there
we are always brilliantly
complete-whole-enough-perfect.
My sky may seem dark and starless
but I know I am up there
(and so are you) shining
without anything diminishing us.
Published 13th Apr 2022
Author's Note
I love reading these in my head. Feeling the words...
(and so are you) shining
I keep realizing how essential the reader is to these poems. Thank you for being here with me.
(and so are you) shining
I keep realizing how essential the reader is to these poems. Thank you for being here with me.
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13th Apr 2022 7:30pm
Cipher! Here is the poem I was thinking of when you mentioned your Star of Destiny. Thank you!
13th Apr 2022 7:50pm
Anonymous
13th Apr 2022 8:30pm
Hi Senid,how are you?
Great pen.
X
Great pen.
X
16th Apr 2022 4:42pm
Thank you. I'm always happy when I post a poem. I rarely like them as I post, but like them more later. Thanks for commenting.
