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Broken Dream
Nothing in the world it seems
shatters like a broken dream.
It is the hurt behind the mean
of feeling broken and unseen.
And my broken dreams to sorrow
exists no dawn and no tomorrow.
Only hours as they pass.
Like little fragments of broken glass.
And yet one and another.
This night is meant to suffer.
But look up now and see how far,
they light your way like a little star.
Oh if only I had a star to shine,
For every broken dream of mine,
The whole night would turn to day
and all my troubles would melt away.
shatters like a broken dream.
It is the hurt behind the mean
of feeling broken and unseen.
And my broken dreams to sorrow
exists no dawn and no tomorrow.
Only hours as they pass.
Like little fragments of broken glass.
And yet one and another.
This night is meant to suffer.
But look up now and see how far,
they light your way like a little star.
Oh if only I had a star to shine,
For every broken dream of mine,
The whole night would turn to day
and all my troubles would melt away.
Published 12th Apr 2022
Author's Note
I wrote this when I was 12. I hope you all like it.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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12th Apr 2022 5:23pm
13th Apr 2022 2:22pm
13th Apr 2022 2:56pm
13th Apr 2022 5:48pm
Beautiful piece, BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Fight the good fight, you'll find your Sun
Love and light
Ron x
Fight the good fight, you'll find your Sun
Love and light
Ron x
14th Apr 2022 9:51pm
13th Apr 2022 9:03pm
Hey, welcome to the site and this is a great poem, unfortunately you've entered it in a non-eligible comp, but no worries, just click share to visit the post, click edit and delete the link. You're welcome to enter other comps, just read the guidelines first to make sure it qualifies, thanks
13th Apr 2022 9:13pm
Hi, Contra - Reading competition guidelines proves to be very helpful prior to entering them.
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You can either visit the below link and delete your entry ( note that once you delete the link per PoetsRevenge's instructions above, you will have to type "Edit" or something in the space, as you cannot completely delete forum posts ). A moderator will hide the post if you have not. Thank you for understanding. The NaPo Challenge is for registered NaPo participants only.
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