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Sisyphean Mind Freak
Wombed into Sisyphean dilemma
Calamity of humanity in gamma
Condemned to a world governed by
Human structures corrupted by
Power over others in an elaborate
Game infiltrating a private
World with instituted lattices
Unfurled into agenda driven places
Like every day as a stone
Over well worn upward paths we were shown
Then one day I studied the surface
Stain of sweated blood seeing a trace
Of lexiconic shape shifting into a scape
Philologically conveying to me a great escape
Composed in chiseled alphabets
Rosed around thorns opening outlets
Wombed into cracked clouds of light
Burning into my eyes a design of sight
Vision of a new world to make my home
Envisioned as stone becoming a poem to roam.
Published 4th Apr 2022
Author's Note
NaPo Series: #4
Format originated by LDF
in the piece: "Luminous".
I call it the [Luminous Structure].
(Headed to grill something. Me hungry.)
Format originated by LDF
in the piece: "Luminous".
I call it the [Luminous Structure].
(Headed to grill something. Me hungry.)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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4th Apr 2022 10:59am
Well, this was a great way to start the day! You've got me thinking about dear Sisyphus, and the (lack of?) meaning of life, and poetry as escape... and that is bound to reveal a poem by the end of the day. Thank you for tickling my brain... I'm off now to go push stones up a hill...
Great write
🙂k
Great write
🙂k
5th Apr 2022 7:31am
Thank you K!
So so happy to have stimulated
your thoughts/thinking.
Keep doing the thing...
I am really digging your productions.
So so happy to have stimulated
your thoughts/thinking.
Keep doing the thing...
I am really digging your productions.
4th Apr 2022 12:15pm
Dear CO,
While Sisyphus always provides me with the representation of futility I bend my thoughts to allow that while my struggle is real it will end in a learned positive somehow. Some days are easier than others to believe this but…on all days I can say without hesitation you are smashing it awesomely in NaPo!! Your writes continue to be wonderful and thought provoking. H🌷
While Sisyphus always provides me with the representation of futility I bend my thoughts to allow that while my struggle is real it will end in a learned positive somehow. Some days are easier than others to believe this but…on all days I can say without hesitation you are smashing it awesomely in NaPo!! Your writes continue to be wonderful and thought provoking. H🌷
5th Apr 2022 7:34am
That's very kind of you H.
I always enjoy hearing your perspectives.
(And am enjoying your NaPo pieces...)
Much appreciated.
I always enjoy hearing your perspectives.
(And am enjoying your NaPo pieces...)
Much appreciated.
4th Apr 2022 2:05pm
You really can connect the image to the language of your poetic style or maybe it's vice versa?!?... Regardless... The heft of the complete work is undeniable.
Yes, another stellar NaPo entry.
Great ink.
🌹
Yes, another stellar NaPo entry.
Great ink.
🌹
5th Apr 2022 7:38am
Thank you B!
You have me powered up.
I appreciate you deeply.
(In an AN... Sometime, whenever that was...
I was going to write... [Prompted by
image or image prompted by write... Or maybe
both of these and none of these things].)
You have me powered up.
I appreciate you deeply.
(In an AN... Sometime, whenever that was...
I was going to write... [Prompted by
image or image prompted by write... Or maybe
both of these and none of these things].)
4th Apr 2022 7:44pm
One must imagine Sisyphus happy... Albert Camus... nicely done dear poet... it is a fun structure... subtle... yet complex...
5th Apr 2022 7:41am
Thank you LDF.
I very much like the French thinkers,
artists... Writers. :)))
Yes... I gave some these lines some legs.
Sometimes it feel right or good to do so.
You really killed in your execution:
Some of the lines were two words,
and those with backside & frontside rhyme...
Like... Wow.
:)))
I appreciate you deeply.
I very much like the French thinkers,
artists... Writers. :)))
Yes... I gave some these lines some legs.
Sometimes it feel right or good to do so.
You really killed in your execution:
Some of the lines were two words,
and those with backside & frontside rhyme...
Like... Wow.
:)))
I appreciate you deeply.
