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Lost In Love
The first paragraph was for the 'Micro Poetry' Competition
I've expanded on it here
Lost in Love
Lost in You
And yet, guided by the two
Taken by strife
Taken by guilt
And yet, now able to improve on the ‘Us’ we’ve built
Vulnerable in desire
Vulnerable in infatuation
And yet, controlled by the invitation
Battling with change
Battling with novelties
And yet, winning effortlessly with your qualities
Lost in Love
Lost in You
And yet, guided by the two
I've expanded on it here
Lost in Love
Lost in You
And yet, guided by the two
Taken by strife
Taken by guilt
And yet, now able to improve on the ‘Us’ we’ve built
Vulnerable in desire
Vulnerable in infatuation
And yet, controlled by the invitation
Battling with change
Battling with novelties
And yet, winning effortlessly with your qualities
Lost in Love
Lost in You
And yet, guided by the two
Published 12th Mar 2012
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12th Mar 2012 10:35pm
12th Mar 2012 10:42pm
Anonymous
13th Mar 2012 4:23pm
LeesAngel,
So lost, so vulnerable, yet not at all directionless. I like it!
tornado
So lost, so vulnerable, yet not at all directionless. I like it!
tornado
13th Mar 2012 7:33pm
14th Mar 2012 3:42pm
your words describe a scene
that is only meant for dreams
with knights in shining armor
whose only purpose is to keep the heart warmer....;)
that is only meant for dreams
with knights in shining armor
whose only purpose is to keep the heart warmer....;)
14th Mar 2012 5:39pm
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18th Mar 2012 7:12pm
