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The long way 'round
Hearing that heart... beat
little sighs escape
with every exhale
Twilight surrounds;
a small crooked half smile
tenderly gives me away
Dark endeavors twist tightly
all but forgotten,
my hollow empty death throes
Feelings radiate contrary illusion
skewed, unclear
jumbled mid confusion
Specks of reality,
like random glitter
sparkle amidst the sun's ego
Refractive heat, soul-warms
inviting possibility
to openly thrive
Each heel meeting toe
stepping purposely ... closing in
welcomes back
What always was mine
Making peace
between past and present
renascent togetherness
strides towards
their rewritten future.
Published 23rd Mar 2022
Author's Note
©Blu2022
Thoughts surrounding the quote "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back they're yours; if they don't they never were to begin with."
88 Unique word count.
Artwork: "Embracing The Unscripted"
by Duy Huynh
Thoughts surrounding the quote "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back they're yours; if they don't they never were to begin with."
88 Unique word count.
Artwork: "Embracing The Unscripted"
by Duy Huynh
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Mar 2022 6:11am
Nice to have you home beautiful
Great write, lovely read
Love and light
Ron xx
Great write, lovely read
Love and light
Ron xx
23rd Mar 2022 9:09pm
Kind of back kind of contemplating... Lol...
You are positively awesome and I've missed you. Hope you are doing well and at least hanging in there...
Thank you for the kind words shown..
🌹 - B
You are positively awesome and I've missed you. Hope you are doing well and at least hanging in there...
Thank you for the kind words shown..
🌹 - B
23rd Mar 2022 6:29am
How the fragile is made of spaces
with tenuous appearances...
But somehow hold together,
like the mystery of existence itself, which has a foundation of fragility.
Like... Love?
What a strange fragility.
A nuance filled detour into a magical place, B.
Most excellent.
with tenuous appearances...
But somehow hold together,
like the mystery of existence itself, which has a foundation of fragility.
Like... Love?
What a strange fragility.
A nuance filled detour into a magical place, B.
Most excellent.
23rd Mar 2022 9:10pm
Much obliged, my friend 🙏
Thank you for seeing what you do.
I needed your eyes and thoughts.
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for seeing what you do.
I needed your eyes and thoughts.
🌹 - 💙
B
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23rd Mar 2022 11:01am
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23rd Mar 2022 9:13pm
Hey there, Jay
To be felt and appreciated, especially the way you've described....is surprising and completely uplifting. Thank you for being here, sharing with me and for the generousity you bestow.
I feel lucky to have such great friends/feedback.
🌹 - B
xo
To be felt and appreciated, especially the way you've described....is surprising and completely uplifting. Thank you for being here, sharing with me and for the generousity you bestow.
I feel lucky to have such great friends/feedback.
🌹 - B
xo
23rd Mar 2022 11:15am
Seeing through our previous objections in life integrates us with those formerly rejected parts.
My former fears have become shields. My former faults street credit on human avenues. My age, an ability to face any foe. The more I go along the more I get along. Even my enemies realize their amalgamation rests on disappearing blockades of disintegrating time. Within the unification of the existance field every wall falls before me. I am one with all and what was there is now here. All is a falling. Upon this I stand. Synchronicity dissolves duality. Death is a phase. Eternity is a footstool. Existance is pure energy operating at various speeds. The universe is a spectrum of nuances, chief among which is the conscious spark which flickers its symphonic echo of self-evidence, alone but never lonely.
My former fears have become shields. My former faults street credit on human avenues. My age, an ability to face any foe. The more I go along the more I get along. Even my enemies realize their amalgamation rests on disappearing blockades of disintegrating time. Within the unification of the existance field every wall falls before me. I am one with all and what was there is now here. All is a falling. Upon this I stand. Synchronicity dissolves duality. Death is a phase. Eternity is a footstool. Existance is pure energy operating at various speeds. The universe is a spectrum of nuances, chief among which is the conscious spark which flickers its symphonic echo of self-evidence, alone but never lonely.
23rd Mar 2022 9:20pm
I think perhaps those conscious and unconscience sparks become fuel, allowing my desire or maybe it's my inspired self to bleed out it's creativity... In ways I'm not fully understanding of appreciative of...
Just a big ol random thought.
Thanks for the pondering, RT.
It's eye opening and takes a bit of weight off... I feel lighter... That's pretty amazing.
🌹 - B
Just a big ol random thought.
Thanks for the pondering, RT.
It's eye opening and takes a bit of weight off... I feel lighter... That's pretty amazing.
🌹 - B
23rd Mar 2022 9:35pm
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23rd Mar 2022 10:45pm
I enjoy the line delivery, like a monologue to a dream, soft and tender to eye.
Wonderful spill blue.
Wonderful spill blue.
23rd Mar 2022 10:52pm
Thank you so much for reading and seeing what I hoped to convey... It's meaningful to me.
Much obliged, dear Walter
🌹 - 💙
B
Much obliged, dear Walter
🌹 - 💙
B
You got to believe in love but you can't believe in a guarantee. This is saying is from the movie With Honors. Keep 0n writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman in a sexy bikini 👙.
24th Mar 2022 4:16am
I feel like we believe in ourselves and that's the only true guarantee .... Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Francisco. I appreciate you taking the time.
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24th Mar 2022 5:42am
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24th Mar 2022 2:46pm
Awwww... Tremendously awesome to know and even better to feel... Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
I hope you are doing well.
🌹 - B
x
I hope you are doing well.
🌹 - B
x
27th Mar 2022 2:05pm
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28th Mar 2022 10:56pm
WOW! I really needed this, WHAT a piece of writing, Just beautiful and perfectly worded.
'Specks of reality,
like random glitter
sparkle amidst the sun's ego'
BLEW my mind...blew it...or should I say...BLUE it! eh...eh..eeeeehhhhhhhhh... lol
This is up there, it's a daily read for me
'Specks of reality,
like random glitter
sparkle amidst the sun's ego'
BLEW my mind...blew it...or should I say...BLUE it! eh...eh..eeeeehhhhhhhhh... lol
This is up there, it's a daily read for me
28th Mar 2022 11:28pm
Hahaha... Yes Blue, indeed... *wink
Awww... Your amazing and blush-worthy praise/feedback is an unexpected delight!
So very glad you enjoyed reading and found some worthiness here, Kieron.
Thank you for the RL add and for sharing your thoughts with me -💙
🌹-B
Awww... Your amazing and blush-worthy praise/feedback is an unexpected delight!
So very glad you enjoyed reading and found some worthiness here, Kieron.
Thank you for the RL add and for sharing your thoughts with me -💙
🌹-B
29th Mar 2022 2:59pm
You words wrapped in sentiments insisted me to think. I believe that it is relevant to be free and vulnerable in love to find how strong is the love that holds us together. Secondly play freely and fearlessly to find the freedom of relationship. Anyways, Your note at the bottom What Buddha said, "If you love someone set it free, if it comes back its yours otherwise wasn't." Love is an adventurous game to play to get hurt and move on.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
