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not waiting
10mins
come on hurry up
you turn your computer onto it's side to see if it will make the loading bar go faster
9mins
so much closer to my goal shake computer once
5mins
the fury is growing more and more
2mins
the computer is doing it on purpose go back to 3mins
1mins
you are rapidly shaking the computer because it won't go fast enough
A few seconds left
You are crying tears of joy
come on hurry up
you turn your computer onto it's side to see if it will make the loading bar go faster
9mins
so much closer to my goal shake computer once
5mins
the fury is growing more and more
2mins
the computer is doing it on purpose go back to 3mins
1mins
you are rapidly shaking the computer because it won't go fast enough
A few seconds left
You are crying tears of joy
Published 12th Mar 2012
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Haha, very true, except in my case it's more like ten years then ten minutes :)
12th Mar 2012 2:02pm
Stupid thing, we wait on something that was supposed to give us more free time to do important things aargh! The poem is right on.
13th Mar 2012 9:24pm
Waiting is painful. Forgetting is painful. But not knowing which to do is the worse kind of suffering is not knowing when.
Anonymous
1st Oct 2012 5:28am
I have no patience for technology. Luckily I'm not technologically illiterate or I'd be pissed all the time! Great piece here.
2nd Oct 2012 6:12pm
Thank you all! i liked writing this peice! even though it felt like years ago!
