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17th Mar 2022 00:48am
The war mess with your mind so be there for that person make sure they are okay. Keep on writing.
22nd Mar 2022 5:23pm
Nicely done E.
Many times those scars can go unseen for a long time. As for the feed back, looks like you're missing a V in the title.
Good luck in the comp.
Many times those scars can go unseen for a long time. As for the feed back, looks like you're missing a V in the title.
Good luck in the comp.
11th Nov 2022 6:55am
Your poem would be a help to service couples dealing with a partner coming home from wars with pieces of their mind messed with. Poignant as in UK today (Armistice or Remembrance Day) we remember the dead and walking-wounded veterans of our wars.
